10 December 2011 @ 01:26 pm
HP: Chains (Severus/Sirius, Harry; PG; Ficlet)  
Title: Chains
Author: [info]sdk
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing/Characters: Severus/Sirius, Harry (though could easily be gen, if you wish)
Rating: PG
Length/Word Count: 545 words
Warnings/Content: AU in which both Severus and Sirius survived and were promptly thrown in Azkaban for their assumed crimes.
Summary: Severus could survive this, if it weren't for his cellmate.
Notes: Almost a year ago, [info]r_grayjoy prompted me with "Sirius/Severus, links". Somehow I misremembered links as chains, and this is the result. Whoops! Thanks to [info]torino10154 for looking over this for me!
Disclaimer: The following is based on fictional characters I don't own doing fictional things in a fictional world I did not create. No copyright infringement intended.


Chains

Even without Dementers to suck the warmth from the air, Azkaban was still a horribly retched place. Not to mention just as lacking in heat as it ever was. Severus pulled his threadbare blanket up around his shoulders and glared at the other occupants of his cell. His chain rattled with his movement, causing them both to spare him a fleeting look, but just as he suspected, they became wrapped up in their whispers once more, leaving Severus alone with his thoughts.

He could survive this, if it weren’t for his cellmate. The intruder was also a product of Severus’ misfortune. He would be unlikely to gain a personal visit from the boy wonder himself if Severus hadn’t been sharing his cell with the boy’s godfather.

Harry bloody Potter: Boy Who Lived, The Chosen One, and now most certainly the star Auror-trainee. He stood in official deep red robes, a color one wasn’t likely to find in a place such as this unless death followed shortly after. But death was the one wish Potter hadn’t seen fit to grant him; no, the bloody imbecile had made the monumentally stupid decision to save his life. One day Severus would have to properly thank him for that.

A guard came, informed Potter his time was up, then escorted him out of the cell. He bestowed no further glance Severus’ way. Just as well. Severus would rather have gone unnoticed completely.

“He’s close.” Black’s voice rasped throughout the barren room. A puff of fog accompanied his words; it must have dipped below the freezing point again. Sirius pulled at his chain and scooted closer, bringing with him the vile stench of an unwashed canine. It did not matter if Black wasn’t currently in his dog form, the smell clung to him regardless.

“Did you hear me, you old bat? Harry’s close!”

“Close to what? Discovering a way to tame that infernal mop of his?”

“No, you bleeding wanker.” Black poked a bony finger into Severus’ shoulder. “Close to clearing our names.”

“Your name, I believe,” Severus said. Potter would have no reason to attempt immunity on Severus’ behalf. Most days, Severus believed Potter had saved him merely so he could watch Severus rot away in prison. It wasn’t as if Severus deserved any less.

“You think I would leave you in here, you tosser? Who would I take pleasure in annoying every moment of the day? Who would I call a great bloody old git, if your ugly snout wasn’t around.” Black curled his fingers around Severus’ wrist and Severus told himself he was too cold to pull away; it would require too much effort. “I told him, both of us, or not at all. But it’s Harry of course.”

Black rested his head against the stone wall and closed his eyes. “He always does the right thing. Not like us.”

It was in Severus’ nature to argue, no matter how truthful Black’s words were, but it was too cold, and the hand around his wrist radiated a comforting warmth that Severus couldn’t ignore. So he rested his head against the hard stone and closed his eyes as well.

Maybe there was hope that he’d die in his own bed one day, outside of these chains. Maybe.

-Fin-



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Keeper of the Cocks: Snape-New bravest man[info]torino10154 on December 10th, 2011 08:21 pm (UTC)
There is something about this that I just adore. The glimmer of hope amidst the dark and cold, the way Sirius talking to him--a kind of crazy excitement to his tone. And naturally just Harry doing the right thing because that's Harry. *nods* Lovely work, hon.
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쉘리 I whip my hair like Bang Bang[info]sdk on December 11th, 2011 08:39 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm so pleased about your comment re: Sirius because that's exactly how I pictured him and I'm so glad that came across. <33333
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alisanne[info]alisanne on December 10th, 2011 08:39 pm (UTC)
Oh, well done!
Yes, I can see Severus and Sirius having worked out a bit of a compromise in prison. This sort of relationship works for them, I think
And of course Harry will save them. It's what he does. ;)
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쉘리 I whip my hair like Bang Bang[info]sdk on December 11th, 2011 08:40 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I had the whole story kind of in my head for how they warmed up to each other so to speak, but not enough time to devote to a whole drawn out story so I'm glad you can see it just from this short little excerpt. :D And yes, of course Harry will, no matter how much that annoys grumpy ex-professors. LOL Thanks, bb! <3
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bonfoi: baubles[info]bonfoi on December 11th, 2011 05:14 am (UTC)
Very good! I was shivering right along with Severus.

Love how Sirius wants Severus free for his own benefit, which dovetails nicely with Severus' own wants.
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쉘리 I whip my hair like Bang Bang[info]sdk on December 11th, 2011 08:41 pm (UTC)
:DDD Thank you so much!
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Rowan Grayjoy[info]r_grayjoy on December 13th, 2011 04:18 am (UTC)
Ha, wow, I totally forgot all about this prompt! LOL It might have taken a while for you to work your way to it, but when you did, what you did with it is FULL OF WIN!!! This? AWESOME, OMG. I owe you a properly flaily comment, and I'll get back to give you one ASAP. <333333333
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쉘리 I whip my hair like Bang Bang[info]sdk on December 14th, 2011 03:20 am (UTC)
LOL, since it's been almost a year (had I waited a couple of weeks, it would have been a year!) I don't blame you for forgetting! I'm just glad I finally got it written and that you liked it! :DDDD Thanks so much! <3333
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Rowan Grayjoy[info]r_grayjoy on December 31st, 2011 11:13 pm (UTC)
Well, if it took you a year to fill the prompt, then it's okay that it's taken me almost three weeks to get back and leave a more thorough comment, right...?? But seriously, I had to come back sooner or later, 'cause this ficlet is just perfect! ::flail::

Snape's characterization is just spot-on here; his thoughts are just so perfectly him. The bitterness, the expectation that nothing good can happen for him, and the self-loathing...

The interaction between him and Sirius is so right as well. snarking even when they're not really snarking. Just because they can, just because it's habit, even though neither of them takes it seriously anymore. Because it's something familiar and comfortable, and they need that where they are, and anything else would be strange and frightening.

“Did you hear me, you old bat? Harry’s close!”

“Close to what? Discovering a way to tame that infernal mop of his?”

“No, you bleeding wanker.” Black poked a bony finger into Severus’ shoulder. “Close to clearing our names.”

“Your name, I believe,” Severus said. Potter would have no reason to attempt immunity on Severus’ behalf. Most days, Severus believed Potter had saved him merely so he could watch Severus rot away in prison. It wasn’t as if Severus deserved any less.


There. The auto-snark, and Snape's belief that nothing good can happen to him and that he deserves the bad things anyway. Also, still the refusal to understand Harry. Heh.

“You think I would leave you in here, you tosser? Who would I take pleasure in annoying every moment of the day? Who would I call a great bloody old git, if your ugly snout wasn’t around.” Black curled his fingers around Severus’ wrist and Severus told himself he was too cold to pull away; it would require too much effort. “I told him, both of us, or not at all. But it’s Harry of course.”

Black rested his head against the stone wall and closed his eyes. “He always does the right thing. Not like us.”


Abjlyvabuk!! Affection expressed perfectly for these two! Again, snark and insults as endearments because they're comfortable and safe, where "typical" expressions of affection would be weird and scary. Everything with this pair is in what they don't say, and HOW they say what they do say.

Also, Snape lying to himself for his own peace of mind (even though he doesn't really believe himself)... And the admission that they're similar in a lot of ways... and maybe even that they've been wrong in the way they treated each other in the past...

Just a whole world of FLAIL! I can't believe how well you captured the dynamic in 545 words! <333333
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