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Tweak says, "I ate it"

Tabitha Ogletree is full of vim and vigour (caritasmitis) wrote in goose_ooc,
@ 2016-09-17 11:53:00

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player: heather

Hi folks! I am in need of some assistance re: the character I am apping. My tired, anxious brain is refusing to let me proof-read with any kind of objectivity (just screaming THIS IS TERRIBLE, SCRAP IT, WHAT MAKES YOU THINK YOU CAN WRITE AMERICANS YOU STUPID BRIT) and I'm kind of hitting a wall.

So, I need someone/s willing to lend a hand beta reading before I submit him. He's an Azurcrest Sophomore and I'm up to the point of his Freshman year so he's not far off done.

TIA :)

- Heather (Tabitha and Dominic)

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	caritasmitis 2016-09-17 12:32 pm UTC (link)
	Ditto! I'm used to Britpicking for people and now I'm kind of OH SHIT. Ha ha XD I'm actually just after general proofreading and a vague "does he read OK?" rather than specific cultural things, but if anything glaring jumps out at folks I would be hugely appreciative :) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	overturn 2016-09-17 01:19 pm UTC (link)
	Haha I bet. And I was actually trying to think of a term for Britpicking, but American. It's hard, britpicking is just so catchy. And I can do that! I'm going to a party for an hour or so though, so if it's hurry hurry someone else probably should. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	unregrettable 2016-09-18 01:03 pm UTC (link)
	Amediting? Americorrecting or Americhecking? IDK THIS IS REALLY HARD :\| (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	overturn 2016-09-22 12:20 am UTC (link)
	Amediting makes me think of American Express for some reason (Reply to this) (Parent)

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