Re: Firefly - River, Saffron, Jayne
I love the way you write Jayne - you don't dull him down or write him as lying about being callous in order to hide his feelings, he just has multiple priorities that others would probably not admit to. He genuinely can be a selfish bastard, but that doesn't mean he doesn't care deeply at the same time.
I also lovelovelove where this is going, plot-wise