Oooh, that's interesting. ♥ Cloud's desperation is kinda cute and kinda sad, and I really like how, at first, Angeal's kinda turned turned on by Cloud thinking about Zack, but that eventually turns to jealousy. And Zack seems completely oblivious about the wholte thing.
The detail that I really love is the continued reference to Zack's gloves and "the small embroidered Z on the cuff." It's awesome. ^_^
*grin* I also love how our replies turned out utterly different from each other - that's one of the fun things about having more than one person write a prompt.