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go ask alice (
callalice
) wrote in
40forty
,
@
2010
-
02
-
17
11:57:00
Writer:
callalice
Type:
original fiction
Genre:
original
Characters:
The Heller family
Summary:
A young boy wakes up from an undescribed accident that he cannot remember.
Rating:
G
Word-count:
1,051 words.
Prologue
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karou
2010-02-17 05:43 pm UTC
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That was a really strong start. You've done so much, painted a really great picture. Already I feel like I know the characters, and even though you didn't describe them physically, I can see them clearly! It's really a great start. I can't wait to read more :)
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