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Laylah ([info]laylah) wrote in [info]1931,
@ 2008-07-25 20:38:00

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Entry tags:berga, chane, claire, firo, huey, isaac, jacuzzi, keith, luck, maiza, miria, nice, short fic

"Stacked Deck," 0-10/21, assorted cast
Title: "Stacked Deck"
Parts: 0 through 10 of 21
Author: Laylah
Characters: assorted
Rating: worksafe
Word Count: 9x100 and 1x200, 1100 words overall
A/N the first: Credit goes to [info]puella_nerdii for the concept! She mentioned Claire being the Chariot, and I couldn't get the idea of a Baccano! Major Arcana series out of my head.
A/N the second: The Tarot deck I'm most familiar with is the Thoth, which has a few significant differences from the more common Rider-Waite both in name and order of the cards. I've used the Thoth order and names for this set.


Stacked Deck

The Fool

Every morning when Firo wakes up he remembers how blessed he is. He stretches, and rolls out of bed not a day older, not a day slower than he was a year ago. It's going to be another beautiful day, and New York is -- America is -- one huge array of possible adventures, laid in front of him.

He opens his door, looks down the hall. "Ennis?" She's usually awake before he is.

She looks out from the kitchen. "Yes?"

"Let's head down to the train station today," Firo says. "I think it would be fun to travel for a while."


The Magus

The art of managing a territory, particularly a small one like this, is misdirection as much as muscle, slight of hand as much as show of force. The police, the other families, the news agency -- all of them are elements in the balance, pressures that dampen each other so the Gandors have room to breathe in between.

"The addicts might be a problem," Luck says when his men have reported. "Track them down. I want to know who sells those drugs before the police do." He smiles faintly. "So perhaps we should leave the delinquents alone. They draw attention enough."


The High Priestess

Nothing that the man in white says surprises Chane. Of course the Lemures resent her; they've worked so hard, and risked so much, without any assurance that they will ever mean even as much to her father as she does. They will turn on her, as weak men do.

But she does not fear them, and they are fools if they think she will be defeated easily. She raises her knives as the man in white aims his gun at her. Let her blades say what needs to be said. She has faith enough in her own power for that.


The Emperor/The Empress

"Ah! Say, Isaac!"

"What's that, Miria!"

"The sun's coming up, Isaac!"

"Right you are, Miria!"

The sun is indeed coming up, fiery on the horizon, which is to say, blazing orange in the east.

"Isaac, does that mean --"

"It certainly does, Miria! Rail Tracer is defeated!"

They clasp hands, triumphant for the one hundred seventeenth time in their acquaintance, and smile at the poor frightened child they've rescued.

"You see, Czeslaw, you have no reason to worry!" Miria declares. "You can trust Isaac to make it better!"

"Absolutely, Miria!" Isaac promises. "Everything will be fine now!"

Czeslaw looks tired, that is to say, he looks as though he's had a very long night! He looks as though he still needs cheering up.

"Say, Miria!" Isaac ventures.

"What is it, Isaac!"

Isaac leans close, like a conspirator, like someone telling secrets. "Did we ever find a souvenir for Ennis?"

"Ah!" Miria clasps her hands over her heart. "We didn't! You don't mean --!"

"I certainly do! This way he can have a family! And she can have a little brother!"

"And everyone will be happy, Isaac!"

"Everyone!"

Czeslaw is crying when they help him up, but surely they're tears of joy.


The Heirophant

His little girl watches him with wide, serious eyes. She is speechless before him, and attentive; there is nothing of her mother in her. Huey made sure of it. He's had practice at shaping people, and his homunculi give him far less raw material to work with than this.

"My little Chane," he says, resting his hand on her head. "You're going to be my good daughter always, aren't you?"

Her thoughts are a tangle, young and half-formed as she still is, but he can hear her desire to earn his approval.

"Good girl," Huey says. "Never forget that."


The Lovers

"When you kissed me --"

"I'm sorry!" Jacuzzi says, frantic, and for a second Nice thinks he might cry, even now, when everything is -- finally -- fine.

"Don't say sorry," she says, shaking her head. She reaches out slowly, gently, and traces the line of his tattoo -- his brow, his temple, his cheek. "I wasn't going to reproach you for it." He cries so she won't have to, just like he got the tattoo so she wouldn't have to be brave alone.

Nice leans in close for their second kiss, because he shouldn't have to do all the tough things, either.


The Chariot

Claire is sixteen when he discovers how easy it is to kill a man. There's an argument over something stupid, whether Claire had any business looking at a pretty girl, that turns into a fight -- and it's simple to avoid the guy's punches, simpler to get him off balance, and natural as breathing to snap his neck at the apex of a flip.

The girl's already fleeing by the time Claire's feet touch the ground, but that's fine. She can't have been the one for him.

More importantly -- he looks at his hands, and triumph hums in his veins -- he's invincible.


Adjustment

They get back to the office too late. Mike and the night crew are dead, shot with tommy guns. It looks like Mike was going for the phone when they got him in the back.

"Those bastards!" Berga says, his hands curling into fists. It still smells like gunpowder. The attack must have just happened. "We'll kill them!" Luck and Keith don't look pissed enough. "Right? All of them!"

"We don't know who did it," Luck says.

Berga opens his mouth to argue, and Keith says, "We'll find out."

"Right." Berga smiles, cracks his knuckles. "And we'll make them pay."


The Hermit

"Impressive," Don Martillo says, "really impressive, that a young man like you should have so many talents."

Maiza has been a young man for so long it pains him to remember. "Thank you," he says, and smiles. "I'm happy to lend whatever skills I have to your organization.

Don Martillo nods; that's a formality and they both know it. "You looked untouchable out there," he says, gesturing to the fighting ring.

"You flatter me," Maiza says. He's practiced that for decades: if he gets cut, he'll have to explain why he heals. To hide, he takes no injury at all.


Fortune

He cheats, of course. They all do. They're mafia men, and who ever heard of a mafia man playing fair?

It goes along with the rest of what they are, what they do. You don't get anywhere in a business like this unless you make your own luck.

His brothers admire his skill at it, and that's the real good fortune. They know each other's strengths and play to them -- Keith slips the last card he needs from his sleeve -- instead of resenting them.

"Call," Luck says, smiling in anticipation.

Keith lays down his aces, and picks up his cigar.



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[info]mahokiwi
2008-07-25 10:55 pm UTC (link)
\o/ they are all so cool! Jacuzzi and Nice are so sweet, and Issac and Miria so...dorky...and just---yes all so cool

Chane's was fabulous, Claire's was fabulous

just, fabulous all around~

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[info]laylah
2008-07-25 10:57 pm UTC (link)
faaaabulous~

They were so much fun! Writing parallels into Chane's after I'd written Claire's was so good. Confidence, oush!

I may never have the courage to attempt Isaac and Miria again, but I'm sort of pleased to have managed it once. ^^;

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[info]white_aster
2008-07-25 10:57 pm UTC (link)
eeee. ^______^ I suck at remembering most of the meanings, but I remember enough to see the connections in these.

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[info]laylah
2008-07-25 10:58 pm UTC (link)
I would be happy to babble on at length about what aspects of the cards made me pick people. I feel like I actually had reasons for all of these ones! There might be one or two in the second half that I'm shakier on. but. well.

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[info]white_aster
2008-07-25 11:03 pm UTC (link)
Heh, looking back, actually, I think I can see all of them! Except maybe Adjustment (Temperence?). That one I'm always a bit shaky on.

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[info]laylah
2008-07-25 11:06 pm UTC (link)
Adjustment->Justice. ...mafia style. ^_^

Temperance becomes Art in the Thoth deck (and is Art in the sense of The Great Art), but I'm probably going to give it to Eve anyway. Because it's a good match for her determination.

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[info]white_aster
2008-07-25 11:08 pm UTC (link)
aaaaaaaaah, that makes much more sense, then. ^_______^

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[info]cadence
2008-07-25 11:04 pm UTC (link)
♥ I - yes.

Issac and Miria's and Nice and Jacuzzi's made me woob so hard. And all the Gandors are perfect, and Claire and Chane, and Firo and Maiza and goddammitHuey --

So much of why I love this series. ♥

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[info]laylah
2008-07-25 11:08 pm UTC (link)
I wrote Isaac/Miria and Nice/Jacuzzi! And, okay, the I/M I will probably never be able to manage again. But I think I might have sort of gotten an idea what it would take for me to manage more with N/J! So that's pretty cool.

But yeah. The whole set, just. Sitting there going, 'yay! I love this show! a lot!' ♥

thank you~

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[info]puella_nerdii
2008-07-25 11:48 pm UTC (link)
YAAAAAAAAY!

More coherent comments: I love the associations here -- even though I'm a Rider-Waite girl and not a Thoth, they still work so damn well. Firo makes me smile (and of course he's the Fool, it's his journey), all of the Gandors are wonderful and each of the Gandor bits gives a great new perspective on how they work as a family, love the parallels between Claire and Chane, I can't decide whether Isaac and Miria or Jacuzzi and Nice are more adorable so I will go AW AW AW SMOOSHYHEADS to both pairs, Huey is a creepy creepy man, and Maiza needs hugs and sex with Firo.

also, putting the characters in terms of the Tarot clarifies a lot for me -- I tend to be drawn to the Magician, the Chariot, and the Hermit in any given series (and usually the Hanged Man and Death, too), and look who they are here! And look who I happen to like writing! Yeah. It's cool.

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[info]laylah
2008-07-25 11:56 pm UTC (link)
Hah! Yay~ I'm glad that my associations make sense even coming from a different deck! There's still some overlap -- uncle Al is just smoking more of the dope, I think. ^^

And hee, yay for the archetypes matching up! the Magician is always a strong one for me, too (hello COBALT), and the Chariot likewise; the Thoth uses Lust instead of Strength (which he glosses as not just strength itself, but desire to use it, joy in using it), which I mapped to Ladd, and that one's always one of my pings.

In short, thank you so much for the inspiration to do this! I'm having so much fun with them! ♥

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[info]regicidaldwarf
2008-07-26 12:49 am UTC (link)
So, I'm pretty unfamiliar with the Tarot other than basic name recognition, but YAAAAAY, this is awesome. Baccano! is awesome. Drabbles are awesome.

I can understand not wanting to write Isaac and Miria more than once, but D'AWW DORKITUDE, and also Nice/Jacuzzi is really sweet. And yay for Gandors! Working together! Doing things!

Coherency is for the weak, apparently.

♥

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[info]laylah
2008-07-26 08:37 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Like I said to Aster, I'd be happy to dork about why I picked any of these characters for the cards they got. :3

And yes! Gandors! They make such a good set. I feel bad for not writing the others as much as I do Luck. ^^;

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[info]regicidaldwarf
2008-07-26 04:48 pm UTC (link)
The ones I'm most unclear on are the Heirophant and the Chariot because I really don't know what those signify. And I would love to hear you dork out. ^^

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[info]laylah
2008-07-26 06:19 pm UTC (link)
Happily!

The Hierophant signifies (formal) knowledge, and the power that comes from knowledge/study -- in some of the oldest decks, he's called the Pope. (As such, he's tied to the High Priestess -- there are a lot of cards in the Majors that represent "masculine" and "feminine" aspects of similar ideas.) Formal knowledge in Baccano! seems to me to be most clearly expressed in alchemy, and Huey is the one who seems most likely to use that for hierarchical power.
Also, in the Thoth deck -- probably because of Crowley's attitude toward the church -- the Hierophant is always sort of a sinister figure; Crowley says that "He seems to be enjoying a very secret joke at somebody's expense." SO.

The Chariot is the card of triumph, of victory -- the image on the card is the warrior returning from battle, armored and crowned. In the Thoth deck, though not the Rider-Waite, he's carrying the Grail. I think it's probably pretty easy to see why Claire gets that one. ^^

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[info]cephy
2008-07-26 07:28 am UTC (link)
*prr* So much fun.

Issac and Miria! Of course they need exclamation points! ;D

Much love for the Gandor boys, yes.

And awwww, Jacuzzi and Nice. ^^

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[info]laylah
2008-07-26 08:40 am UTC (link)
Yes! I realized about halfway through that I wasn't sure how else they would ever end a sentence. I managed one question mark! But generally, everything is an exclamation. (That and the dialogue verbs were the most fun parts. ^^)

♥
Thank you~

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[info]myeerah
2008-07-26 09:06 am UTC (link)
I confess I'm not intimately familiar with Tarot, so I'm stuck on the meaning of Firo as the Fool. Still, all of these are wonderful to read, Nice and Jacuzzi evoked a sense of awww, and Isaac and Miria cracked me up. As they never fail to do. :D

Also, you have a typo in the beginning: It's going to be another beatiful day, is missing a U.

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[info]laylah
2008-07-26 10:01 am UTC (link)
Thank you!
The Fool is the beginning of the Major Arcana, the first card in the deck -- like the Aces in the Minor Arcana, he stands for possibility, the energy of beginnings that aren't yet focused. He's a stronger card than the Aces, though, because the Majors in general deal with wider spheres of power. If you read the Major Arcana as an allegory (some decks make that easier than others), then it's an allegory of the Fool's journey toward enlightenment. He's the main character(ish) of the Tarot, so I figured Firo would be a good match. ^^

...and ack, thank you! that'll teach me to not run the spellcheck. >->;;

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[info]sheffiesharpe
2008-07-26 09:41 am UTC (link)
Oooooh.

Again, the only things I know about Tarot I learned from Persona 3, but I really enjoyed these pieces as drabbles, too! (Nice and Jacuzzi!)

Keith's makes me so very happy. :D

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[info]laylah
2008-07-26 10:03 am UTC (link)
^_^ Thank you! They were such fun to work on.

(...I think Persona 3 did really cool things with a lot of the Arcana -- a lot of them made really good sense, as far as I understand the deck, even if some of them were surprising. I still want to write something, at some point, that deals with the idea that Shinjiro is currently the Hierophant reversed, and if he can recover from that he'll be a great force for justice.)

♥

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[info]sheffiesharpe
2008-07-26 10:10 am UTC (link)
...SHINJI FOR GREAT JUSTICE.

He hates me. *grin*

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[info]pinstripesuit
2008-07-26 02:43 pm UTC (link)
EEEE Gandors!

Gandors Gandors Gandors :D

want to draw some of these are tarot cards now

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[info]pinstripesuit
2008-07-26 02:43 pm UTC (link)
*as

blegh

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[info]laylah
2008-07-26 03:01 pm UTC (link)
^_________^

Yay!

I certainly wouldn't stop you! ...matter of fact, I think the traditional Wheel of Fortune image has three creatures riding it, too.

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[info]pinstripesuit
2008-07-26 08:43 pm UTC (link)
goddammit now you have me wanting to make an entire baccano tarot card set

i think it's just a symptom of being unemployed and not having enough to do




but they would make good christmas presents for everyone

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[info]laylah
2008-07-26 08:51 pm UTC (link)
...so -- for the suits in the minor arcana, clearly you could use cash (and poker chips) for coins, liquor for cups, knives for swords -- guns for wands?

*NOT HELPFUL AT ALL*

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[info]pinstripesuit
2008-07-26 09:00 pm UTC (link)
I-I was thinking that...

and if i get them printed b&w that could cut down on costs and i could make a box for the deck... *dooooooooooooooomed*

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[info]laylah
2008-07-26 09:22 pm UTC (link)
It would be just about the swankest thing in the history of ever

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[info]pinstripesuit
2008-07-26 09:24 pm UTC (link)
The cards would be all old and distressed looking and the box could look like a train ticket... *design mind running*

OKAY

IF I CAN GET A JOB AND HAVE NON-WORK ACCESS TO ADOBE SOFTWARE

WILL MAKE THESE

I SWEAR

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[info]calligraph
2008-07-27 12:10 am UTC (link)
Luck as the Magician, and Claire as the Chariot!!! Those are hot.

Mmmmm, Maiza. I love the image of him as the Hermit.

Nice/Jacuzzi is both touching and sweet.

There's even Czes woobiness.

♥ the writing AND the concept!

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[info]laylah
2008-07-27 12:26 am UTC (link)
♥ ♥ Thank you! I owe a lot of inspiration to Puel for the concept -- I couldn't leave the idea alone, once she mentioned it. ^^

More to follow, as soon as I can scrape the brain together to write them!

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[info]badpenny
2008-07-27 12:04 pm UTC (link)
These are perfect. But "Adjustment" and "Fortune" make me wiggle in glee because I am so, so weak to Berga and Keith. He cheats, of course. They all do. Yes, Keith, and that's why I love you all. :D

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[info]laylah
2008-07-27 12:37 pm UTC (link)
^____^ Thank you!

I sort of always wish I did more with the other Gandors. Luck hogs the spotlight so much. ^^;

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