Youka Nitta
DRABBLES: "Saganaki" and "Fair to See" 
1st-Sep-2008 04:43 pm
Title: Saganaki
Prompt: #5, Fire
Pairing: Iwaki/Katou
Rating: G
Summary: Yoshizumi invites the guys over for a meal.
Note: Saganaki is a dish in Greek-American restaurants where a pan of cheese is set on fire.


“‘Saganaki’? That sounds like a Japanese city,” Katou joked.

“So it does.” Yoshizumi’s lips twitched as Iwaki muttered “Baka!” and smacked his partner. “You’d probably say the same thing about ‘tsatziki,’ I bet.”

Katou’s expression took on a dreamy glaze. “So many things that end with ‘ki’ are so delici-- mfff!” He broke off as a towel smacked him in the face.

“Do not nauseate the chef,” Yoshizumi ordered. “Otherwise, I will set you on fire instead.”

Katou’s eyes danced. “You’re far too late for that, Yoshi-- MMFFF!” Yoshizumi rolled his eyes heavenward as Iwaki gagged Katou with the towel.



Title: Fair to See
Prompt: #5, Fire
Pairings: Ryo/Dee (FAKE) and Iwaki/Katou
Rating: PG
Summary: Sometimes a photograph is a mirror.


At his desk, Ryo spread out images from the previous night’s hotel bombing. Looking over Ryo’s shoulder, Dee let out a low whistle. “Spectacular.”

Ryo murmured, “They’re almost beautiful, the flames. But what a mess--”

“I didn’t mean that,” Dee interrupted. He lightly pressed a fingertip against a snapshot of a blond Japanese man and a dark-haired one locked in a fervent kiss. “Not a sight you see every day-- not even in New York.”

“No,” Ryo whispered. He gazed at the two men-- the soot on their clothes, their hands buried in each other’s hair-- “Spectacular,” he agreed.

[ETA: Sequel to "Fair to See": "Because I Love You More Than I Can Say."]

Comments 
1st-Sep-2008 10:21 pm
Hahaha! Yoshisumi is going to be the death of them... He's just so cute! And Katou... he just can't shut up.. *shakes head*

I like the implications of the last one. You really manage to tell a much longer story in very few words. Precisely like a drabble should be.
3rd-Sep-2008 05:46 am
I hesitate to admit this, but there's a good deal of Katou in my own personality. From what he tells me, my partner is still never quite confident that I'll actually hold my tongue when I should...

And I'm thrilled you enjoyed the second one -- praise from you is always meaningful, since I know your standards are high.
1st-Sep-2008 10:57 pm
I love FAKE, so it's nice to see Ryo and Dee put in an appearance! And the first drabble made me giggle, with Katou being so typically Katou. But I do agree with Katou that "saganaki" sounds Japanese! ^_^
3rd-Sep-2008 05:58 am
Someday I will have to write a Dee and Katou conversation - because, while I suspect most people would categorize me as Iwaki- and Ryo-like in attitude (I've been accused of being reserved and aloof many times), I've totally been where Dee and Katou are. And it would be fun to try to show them connecting over it while not really talking about it (i.e., figuring out some way for them to reveal their feelings without giving myself an emo overdose)-- some sort of h/c involving the other two, perhaps... [/digression]

Glad to get you giggling, and thanks for the feedback!
3rd-Sep-2008 04:11 pm
I like especially of the second one, a long story made short and four of my favourite men in one story. Very nice ^^
7th-Sep-2008 08:34 am
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ...And, I hadn't planned on a sequel, but I just finished writing one...
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