Your ingenuous Harry is adorable; I love how he wraps himself around Severus as snake and as young man - he certainly knows what he wants, and that Severus wants it too (even if he won't admit it). I applaud your other changes to canon - Dumbledore etc still alive, Sirius and Remus lovers, no sign of Ginny - all in all, it reads like one of the more light-hearted stories written in the good old days before Book 7. Great fun, thanks!