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snarryswapmod (snarryswapmod) wrote in snarry_swap,
@ 2008-01-05 01:59:00

Entry tags:

cluegirl, creation: fic, rated: nc-17

Happy Daft Day, sheena_bandy!
Recipient: sheena_bandy
Title: Disenchanted
Author: cluegirl
Rating: NC17
Warnings: Chan -- 16, D/s, mild CBT, and orgasm denial, sorta-kinda-but-not-really bestiality, allusions to child abuse.
Prompt/Summary: bondage and d/s ^.^ Bottom!Harry, and child abuse/violence with abused!Harry.
Author's Note: Took me awhile to work out how to do a child abuse rescue and a happy sub in one story, and still keep it under novel length, but here's my best run at it. Hope it suits you.

Disenchanted

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	inoru_no_hoshi 2008-01-05 10:47 am UTC (link)
	Ooh, I like that. I think you worked the elements of it together very well. And hey, possessive!Snape is hot as hell. :D ~Mara~ (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:39 pm UTC

inoru_no_hoshi, 2008-01-13 04:26 am UTC

	aliciajd 2008-01-05 11:28 am UTC (link)
	So far above and beyond outstanding as to leave me without words! Thank you! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:40 pm UTC

	quill_lumos 2008-01-05 01:09 pm UTC (link)
	Wow! That was amazing. Very clever. well crafted and original. I loved Harry cat and how he slowly came to trust Severus and how Severus gradually became more and more fond of him. I also loved Severus' fierce possessiveness. Lovely story. hugs Lucie (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:40 pm UTC

	sheena_bandy 2008-01-05 02:29 pm UTC (link)
	is speechless Wow. I love this! It's hot and magnificent and I adore the possessive!snape ^_^ And perfect way to get Harry to recover from the Dursleys! feels warm inside And I love Cat!Harry! Brilliant! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:41 pm UTC

	alexis_sd 2008-01-05 03:19 pm UTC (link)
	That was delightful. I thoroughly enjoyed your plotty smutty story. I love how Snape was him all through it and still cared for Harry. Great fic! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:42 pm UTC

	klynie1 2008-01-05 03:26 pm UTC (link)
	The gargoyle was brilliant. Actually, the whole story was brilliant, but the gargoyle particularly so. I really enjoyed how you developed the relationship between Harry and Severus, the slow build of trust that each of them had to learn. And Minerva cracked me up! g (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:43 pm UTC

	torino10154 2008-01-05 04:47 pm UTC (link)
	Wow, that was great. I was so glad to see "Tuney"-there really needs to be more fic with Snape and Petunia. But, more to the point, I loved the way you developed their relationship-the cat being sort of the mediator in a way, when Harry wasn't quite ready to be himself yet. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:44 pm UTC

	alisanne 2008-01-05 05:21 pm UTC (link)
	Guh! First of all, I love Snape's inner thoughts here, the way he went from grumbling to claiming Harry was perfect and the sex... DAMN, so hot! Harry's antics as a cat had me cracking up, as did your oh so clever!Minerva. g Dead!Pettigrew and gargoyle!Bella were great touches. Nicely done. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:45 pm UTC

	hambares 2008-01-05 06:45 pm UTC (link)
	It makes me all warm and fuzzy to see Snape get so possessive of his Harry. And Kitty!Harry - so adorable. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:46 pm UTC

	snakeling 2008-01-05 09:18 pm UTC (link)
	Wow! Not sure I have more words, because my brain seems to have melted. Thank you! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:47 pm UTC

	b_e_skrewt 2008-01-05 11:00 pm UTC (link)
	This was great. Please, please, please, write a sequel! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:48 pm UTC

	arielhime 2008-01-05 11:41 pm UTC (link)
	Wow... that was amazing! Beautifully written and just... wow... ^_^ grins I loved how it all worked out in a way... Severus is sexy as all hell and cat!Harry is just... squees I loved it!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:49 pm UTC

	ivylady 2008-01-06 12:31 am UTC (link)
	I love possessive Snape and Harry the cat was great. So afraid to trust, but warming up to Severus. Minerva was a surprise. I loved her thinking and willingness to do what was necessary, even if Albus wouldn't have agreed. Wonderfully done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:50 pm UTC

	painless_j 2008-01-06 01:31 am UTC (link)
	Awww, was charming and hot and full of wonderful magic! I loved it that Harry's fingers started shortening and letting out claws when he got nervous! And cat!Harry was just so damn cute! Thank you! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:52 pm UTC

	snowpuppies 2008-01-06 02:39 am UTC (link)
	This was lovely. Enjoyed it immensely. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:52 pm UTC

	snarry_fan7 2008-01-06 06:20 am UTC (link)
	Marvelous and lovely work! I love cat!Harry and how he kept some human characteristics as a cat (the vague words) and some cat characteristics as a human (the shortening of the nails and lengthening of the ears). I love Snape's possessiveness as well. Well done.~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:54 pm UTC

	tgin 2008-01-07 03:56 am UTC (link)
	Wow, that was wonderfully original. Harry being abused by the Dursleys is one of my favourite plot devices. I loved how their relationship slowly developed. Snape's possessiveness is always sexy as hell ;) Excellent work! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:54 pm UTC

	draconic_girl 2008-01-07 07:58 pm UTC (link)
	I really enjoyed reading your story, particularly because of 'Harry the cat' :) There are too few stories that include Harry as a cat. Anyway, liked the way you portrayed Snape. Over all a great story. And I think Bellatrix made a wonderful new gargoyle for the Ravenclaw tower. And dang... somehow the ending came so suddenly... My only complaint... LOL (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:56 pm UTC

	munanna 2008-01-07 09:38 pm UTC (link)
	Amazing work! Verrry hot. :DDDD (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:56 pm UTC

	jillypooh 2008-01-08 05:49 am UTC (link)
	I followed painless_j's rec over here. This is so bloody good! Kitty!Harry is so amusing and watching Severus give in to him was a treat. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:57 pm UTC

	sivullinen 2008-01-08 01:56 pm UTC (link)
	I loved the way how you had worked in facts from the later books into this, and how hot this was ___ (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:58 pm UTC

	centaury_squill 2008-01-09 03:29 pm UTC (link)
	Cat!Harry was just great. Lovely fic! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 05:59 pm UTC

	leni_jess 2008-01-09 11:34 pm UTC (link)
	A most interesting involuntary cat!Harry, and his developing relationship with Severus, as cat then as boy, learning trust. I liked the twists on canon (and loved the slaying of Pettigrew, and Bellatrix as gargoyle). I enjoyed your confident pretty-much amoral Snaspe, too. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 06:00 pm UTC

	(Anonymous) 2008-01-10 06:42 am UTC (link)
	Loooovvveeedddd this!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 06:01 pm UTC

	(Anonymous) 2008-01-10 01:29 pm UTC (link)
	Wow. Loved it. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cluegirl, 2008-01-12 06:02 pm UTC

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