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snarryhols ([info]snarryhols) wrote in [info]snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-11-05 10:08:00

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Entry tags:fic, giftee: alisanne, rated: nc-17

Fic: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck
Title: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck
Author: [info]leela_cat
Giftee: [info]alisanne
Word Count: ~12,250
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Severus
Warnings: EWE, Seduction through enticing alternatives (aka Dirty Talk)
Disclaimer: Don't own them. Don't make any money from them. I just let them have a bit more fun than JKR ever did.
Summary: Severus and Harry end up in the same hospital for very different reasons. Afterwards, Hermione plots, Harry seduces, and Severus thinks he may just be going slightly mad.
A/N: [info]alisanne, I managed to at least mention most of your kinks and requests, and get two of your optional prompts in as well. Hope you like it.
Many thanks to my amazing betas: F, M, and J.

One Wave Short of a Shipwreck


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[info]snapesgirl
2008-11-05 10:02 am UTC (link)
Very nicely done.

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(no subject) - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 07:51 pm UTC

[info]alisanne
2008-11-05 10:33 am UTC (link)
Eeeee!
I can't wait to read this but I'm at work so I'll be printing it out to read during my meeting later today! *bounces*
So excited!

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(no subject) - [info]alisanne, 2008-11-05 05:15 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 07:56 pm UTC

[info]ciraarana
2008-11-05 12:34 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, such a lovely story! Child Harry was so cute, and I really liked the chaning povs. And the emotions, so warm and loving. The perfect story for bringing a little light to a grey, grey day. *bookmarks*

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(no subject) - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 07:57 pm UTC

[info]torino10154
2008-11-05 12:53 pm UTC (link)
You had me hooked at the title. ;) Seriously, I loved Severus taking care of Harry, Hermione deciding she was going to help, Ron not coming off like a fool (as happens a lot!), as well as Harry's seduction-yum! Nice work.

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(no subject) - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 07:58 pm UTC

[info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-11-05 02:55 pm UTC (link)
That was just divine! I adored child Harry, and the way Severus took care of him was perfect. The sex scene was so hot and intense. A wonderful story, very well done!

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 08:17 pm UTC

[info]snarry_fan7
2008-11-05 03:05 pm UTC (link)
Very lovely, sweet, and excellent work. Well done!~Sophia

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 08:17 pm UTC

[info]gin_tonic
2008-11-05 03:22 pm UTC (link)
Awww, I just love little Harry! Sooo cute! And the dirty talk was lovely too! :D

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 08:19 pm UTC

[info]maraudersaffair
2008-11-05 03:33 pm UTC (link)
This was seriously one of the best characterizations of Snape I've read. His commentary in the beginning was hilarious.

So sweet!

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 09:19 pm UTC

[info]thesewarmstars
2008-11-05 04:13 pm UTC (link)
Um, yummy? This story is delicious. Way to do dirty talk without it being all awkward and embarrassing. Grudgingly sweet Severus is one of my favorite kinds! Loved it.

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(no subject) - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 09:48 pm UTC

[info]drachenmina
2008-11-05 05:46 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that was fantastic! Especially the first part, with child!Harry so vulnerable and protector!Snape so reluctantly caring! :D

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 10:12 pm UTC

[info]zephyr_macabee
2008-11-05 08:23 pm UTC (link)
Alisanne is a lucky, lucky girl and this is a lovely story.

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 10:13 pm UTC

[info]eriador117
2008-11-06 09:06 am UTC (link)
Lovely, just lovely. I loved little!Harry, so cute :)

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 10:13 pm UTC

[info]svartalfur
2008-11-06 10:25 am UTC (link)
What a wonderful story! I love the Snape-taking-care-of-Harry part, Snape's reluctance and Harry's overabundance of charm. I think what I loved most is Hermione's voice. She's wonderfully lifelike, just like I imagine her. Harry's seduction of Snape is delicious, but really, you already got me hooked with the title. Brilliant work!

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 10:19 pm UTC

[info]fbowden
2008-11-06 02:43 pm UTC (link)
Your Snape is 100% spot on, absolutely brilliant. Little Harry was just too adorable and the tension you built before, during and after the sex was amazing, I felt like I was right there watching them go at it *g* Brilliant stuff. xx

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 10:22 pm UTC

[info]ferdelance
2008-11-06 10:24 pm UTC (link)
he was too far away to disable the damned thing. Merlin's banished left bollock.

Goodness, Merlin did live an interesting life! *eyebrows up*

I'm finding the mental image of five-year-old Harry glued to Snape surprisingly adorable.

It's been almost a month and I know I wasn't *that bad* as a five year old.

Hee! Poor Harry. It's like a really, really bad version of "got drunk and did stupid things that I now really wish I hadn't done" -- looking back on a five-year-old's actions from a perspective of days rather than years would be awfully unnerving.

Ron went over and pulled Harry into a clumsy, one-armed hug. "It wasn't easy being five the first time around. I can't imagine doing it over and over again."

Aww! Yay, Ron! Doing it right for once!

Let's be honest. I'm an opinionated sod with more issues than The Quibbler. And that's not likely to change any time soon.

This is pretty much the best thing Harry has going for him: he's old enough and experienced enough to see himself clearly, and recognise his needs and wants.

Perhaps sanity was overrated.

Hee, definitely! I love them being mad together. :D

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 10:35 pm UTC

[info]red_day_dawning
2008-11-07 06:38 am UTC (link)
What a lovely story! Delicious sex, great lines, snarky but enticing Severus - fantastic!

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-15 11:16 pm UTC

[info]jin_fenghuang
2008-11-07 06:55 am UTC (link)
Awww ickle!harry. And I love your matter of fact Snape. And a mystery to solve. What a great story.

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(no subject) - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-16 09:30 pm UTC

[info]verdenia
2008-11-07 12:36 pm UTC (link)
Severus smirked. Perhaps sanity was overrated.

Eeee, loved this! I was going to wait till after I'd finished voting in The Games to read at this fest, but Ali pointed to this on her journal and... LOVE!

Hermione and the Trio dynamic were lovely, young Harry was too cute, and Severus' snark was delightful.

Also, I recognized so many of her likes reading this -- the skirt fantasy! -- and grinned knowing she'd love it.

Really delightful story, and I loved that you opened with Queen -- extra points for that! If I could vote on this, it'd get full marks! ;p

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(no subject) - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-16 09:37 pm UTC

[info]estioe
2008-11-07 04:35 pm UTC (link)
Eeek! You hooked me on the first line! I love your writing and I loved the story! A de-aged Harry never gets old. :D

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-16 09:39 pm UTC

[info]carpet_diemon
2008-11-07 04:49 pm UTC (link)
Oooh! Delicious.

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-16 09:39 pm UTC

[info]accioslash
2008-11-07 07:01 pm UTC (link)
I'm with everyone else - you had me at the title. Harry was a sweet little boy and it was good to see that even Snape couldn't remain unaffected by his charm for long.

Hermione's affectionate regard for her boys was a nice touch and you really managed to capture her innate personality here. I liked the evolution of the story and the development of the Harry/Snape relationship. I was so involved in what was going on in the story I almost didn't need Harry's omg!hot!seduction of Severus. Almost. ;D This was really just a lovely, fun story. Great job!

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-16 09:42 pm UTC

[info]ivylady
2008-11-07 07:53 pm UTC (link)
I just loved this story--the title made me want to read it right away. I loved little Harry and Severus's interactions. They were charming. I liked the easy relationship between Ron, Hermione and Harry. The way Hermione was able to help out Harry without being pushy (or more pushy than you would expect). Excellent story.

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-16 09:43 pm UTC

[info]angela_snape
2008-11-07 10:21 pm UTC (link)
This was fantastic... I love your Snape, your Hermione is delightfully IC, and the sex was just -- GUH!

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-16 09:43 pm UTC
Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]angela_snape, 2008-12-19 06:03 am UTC

[info]florida_minxie
2008-11-11 04:49 am UTC (link)
HA! Dear Gods, Severus' snarky self was to die for. *snicker*

Wittle Harry was cute, Ron and Hermione added an excellent balance, but Snape? HA! I just bring him home and say - 'Entertain me... now!'

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-16 09:44 pm UTC

[info]firefly124
2008-11-12 06:23 am UTC (link)
Oh wow, this is great! I love little Harry and love the way Hermione nudges the two of them together once he's back to himself. Your Ron/Hermione is even believable, and it takes quite a bit for me to say *that*! Also *points to icon* I got a kick out of your last line. :-D

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Re: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck. - [info]leela_cat, 2008-12-16 09:46 pm UTC

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