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snarryathonmod (snarryathonmod) wrote in snape_potter,
@ 2009-04-21 07:15:00

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fic, rating: nc-17, snarry-a-thon09

Snarry-A-Thon FIC: Sorting It Out
Title: Sorting it Out
Author: lilyseyes
Other pairings/threesome: RW/HG
Rating: NC-17/Adult
Word count: 14,042
Warning(s): (highlight for spoilers) *AU, EWE, post-war/Hogwarts, a touch of angst*
Prompt: #12 - A number of years after the war, Harry finds Snape in a completely Muggle environment. He comes to realize that the cost of surviving the snake bite from hell was Snape's magic.
Summary: Harry takes a vacation from his job as an Auror and begins to rethink the direction his life has taken.
A/N: Beta'd by the three wonderful ladies – you know who you are! florida_minxie, alisanne, and rakina

Sorting It Out

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	florida_minxie 2009-04-21 07:07 am UTC (link)
	AAIIEE! I could not have asked for anything better from my prompt. I have to tell you that when I threw this prompt out there, I never expected the direction you managed to take this. Kudos to you for taking this to a better place than my mind imagined. An absolutely lovely tale! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:47 pm UTC

	polpolaris 2009-04-21 08:39 am UTC (link)
	I really loved the idea of magic transplants and Severus losing his magic being the reason he left. I don't think I've ever seen either of these ideas played out before so that made it a really interesting read. Also loved the mushy stuff and the sound of Severus's cottage. Thanks for the great read! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:48 pm UTC

	eeyore9990 2009-04-21 09:28 am UTC (link)
	Oh, what a lovely, romantic fic! I really, truly enjoyed this! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:48 pm UTC

	japonicastar 2009-04-21 10:21 am UTC (link)
	As Eeyore said, this was a lovely romantic fic that I truely enjoyed. I especially liked the mpreg potion at the end and would love to see these two coping with twins! The bond was lovely and I always have a large soft spot for powerful!Harry. Great fic. Smiles (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:49 pm UTC

	snarry_fan7 2009-04-21 10:59 am UTC (link)
	Most delightful work. I really like how they interact with each other and the ending is grand. Well done!~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:49 pm UTC

	shadowess 2009-04-21 01:29 pm UTC (link)
	oh the idea of magical transplants is very interesting. Severus and Harry were both very IC for this, and the sex was hawt! and huzzah for future mpreg! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:50 pm UTC

	alisanne 2009-04-21 02:46 pm UTC (link)
	Yay! Delicious and romantic. Just what I needed today. :) And that transplant was intense! Ah the things we do for love, eh? Lovely fic! :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:51 pm UTC

	centaury_squill 2009-04-21 03:07 pm UTC (link)
	A magical transplant! How cool is that? Lovely fic. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:52 pm UTC

	miepje_neko 2009-04-21 06:15 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, this made me feel all warm and happy for the two of them! It was absolutely lovely :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:53 pm UTC

	swansong33 2009-04-21 07:00 pm UTC (link)
	That was such a great story! And Severus as a concierge was just trippy! I enjoyed this on so many levels. Great job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:54 pm UTC

	torino10154 2009-04-21 08:38 pm UTC (link)
	Beautiful-I really loved that very first touch, the way Severus could feel Harry's magic. Really warm and romantic fic. Well done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:55 pm UTC

slashpine
2009-04-22 12:48 am UTC (link)

Oooh, this was very sad and angsty and H/C in the first part and then just showered us with fluffyheartlove at the end! Yay for schmoop.

Also, I really *love* your Snape-as-concierge. I'm sure he was very, very good, elegant and efficient and knowledgeable and quiet. So much so that guests would note he had a way of just "seeming to appear when you needed him," and that "he had a way of knowing what you needed, practically as though he could read your mind!" :D

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:57 pm UTC

	galad222000 2009-04-22 02:27 am UTC (link)
	This fic has lots of my favorite things: lovely hurt/comfort followed by love and bonding and Severus getting his magic back. Loved every bit of it. Thanks mystery author for your delightful submission. CB (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-10 11:57 pm UTC

	thesewarmstars 2009-04-22 03:10 am UTC (link)
	Oh, how lovely! I loved the slow, soft progression, the way it just sort of flowed over me. And the line about showing Severus not only that Harry could love him, but that he could be loved... perfection. Great job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:02 am UTC

	accio_kilt 2009-04-23 10:54 pm UTC (link)
	This was wonderful... both men matured, mellowed and changed by their experiences, before coming together as fate determined... wonderfully written! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:07 am UTC

	tabakat 2009-04-24 09:55 pm UTC (link)
	Very romantic fic, and magical core transplants are a very original and intriguing idea. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:07 am UTC

	ivylady 2009-04-25 10:53 pm UTC (link)
	Loved the romance and the ease with which they fell into a relationship, even considering their issues. Wonderful story. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:08 am UTC

	szefi 2009-04-26 02:40 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely H/C fic, and the idea of magic transplant is great. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:10 am UTC

	magialuna 2009-04-26 11:54 pm UTC (link)
	This story was wonderful. Obviously a lot of thought and care went into keeping Harry and Severus carefully in character. I love the references back to canon and how you used the attraction to explain the end of the Occlumancy lessons. Totally incredible and well written fic!!! -Clare (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:11 am UTC

	winoniel 2009-04-27 06:49 pm UTC (link)
	What a sweet story! It was a beautiful moment when Severus realized that he had to go outside of his comfort zone if he was ever going to have a chance with Harry. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:11 am UTC

elvirablue
2009-05-07 01:15 pm UTC (link)

This was an engaging, intense read. Both the magical core transplant and the One True Love were fascinating concepts, and I really liked how you used them to get Severus and Harry together. The overall effect was romantic, yet not completely angst-free. Also, the alternating viewpoints worked very well in establishing their situations early on, and I really enjoyed getting to know how each of them felt about what was happening. Two of my favourite bits:

The mystery was solved when a small group of house-elves had emerged from the shadows the first day he and Harry took possession. Severus had been mildly disgusted as he watched the diminutive creatures fawn over his blushing lover, startled to find a hint of jealousy in himself over the adoration.

Without hesitation, the dark wood rose into the air and flew to Severus' hand with a resounding slam. McGonagall snorted softly, the sound halfway between a laugh and a sob, and while elation filled Harry, it was the look of incredible joy on Severus' face that brought him to tears. Throwing himself across Severus' chest, their hearts beating against each other, Harry let all his fears bubble away and all his hope for a future come together as he was held tightly.

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:13 am UTC

	boopsieanne 2009-05-07 10:23 pm UTC (link)
	So romantic! Wonderful! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:13 am UTC

	majmunka 2009-05-10 07:00 am UTC (link)
	ggggg practice makes the master :D and I'm sure Harry won't mind twins :D Lovely fic and the magical transplantation is a brilliant idea. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:14 am UTC

	quill_lumos 2009-05-10 05:05 pm UTC (link)
	I thought that I'd commented on this story, but obviously not! I loved the premise of Harry sharing his magic with Severus, it's just the sort of thing he would do and you handled it brilliantly. hugs Lucie xxx (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_lilyseyes671, 2009-05-11 12:15 am UTC

unbroken_halo
2010-01-03 09:14 am UTC (link)

Utterly brilliant! I adore bonding fics, and this is another one I will return to again and again. The concept of One True Love and the magical transplant were inspired. I love it when someone takes the beginning premises of the magic JKR tempted us with, and explore it to a fully realized, believable, and amazingly detailed concept.

Sweet, sexy, and fantastically romantic, the beloved characters were perfectly rounded out in their support of Harry and Severus. The details of Harry and Severus's lives, their connection, the realistic bend to the angst, the build-up to the climactic surgery, and the wonderful implication of the Mpreg just made my night.

Thank you for sharing, darling!

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ex_lilyseyes671, 2010-01-03 09:33 am UTC