OK, first, this writing really isn't that bad. The bit where Violator is talking about how scary angels actually are is fairly effective, and the notion of annexing Hell is an interesting one. (Also, the fact that the scientists are obviously reluctant to accept the fact that it IS Hell, or if it is, it shouldn't be CALLED that, because it's offensive somehow. 'No, no, NO, you can't call it Hell! That's Religionist!' Second - how on Earth could you expect anyone to do brilliant writing when saddled with cover art and character designs like those? THAT WOMAN HAS BREASTS THAT ARE LARGER THAN HER HEAD! You could write like Dostoyevski, and still all anyone would talk about afterwards would be the woman with the outsize mammaries dressed in fetish gear that your average dominatrix would pass up as too tacky.