Wow! That was hot! But it was the wonderful S1 characterizations that stood out for me. Some many moments I could easily see happening on the show:
Pulling the door closed, Brian walked to the stairs and paused. Putting his mouth next to Justin’s ear, amusement in voice, he whispered, "I also want my underwear back when you’re done with it." Stammering and blushing furiously, Justin followed him down the stairs and out onto the street.
"Justin, wait. What’s that sticking out of the bottom of your shirt?" she asked as she reached out to grab hold of the material as he passed by.
"Jesus, Mom, it’s just my shirt," he mumbled as he quickly picked up his pace and bounded down the stairs.
"Well at least tuck it in," she said in an exasperated voice as she tried to keep up with him.
"Uh huh," Deb said, her eyes narrowing. "You didn’t come by just to see Brian did you? Because he probably won’t show," Deb said, her voice becoming soft. "You’re young and gorgeous, kiddo, and with a fucking killer smile like yours, you should be out chasing boys your own age and getting laid. Or going to football games or movies or…I don’t know. Anything but sitting in this diner waiting for Brian to grace us with his presence."
"I wasn’t waiting for Brian," Justin said indignantly.
"Sure sweetie. Now finish busing that table before we get busy again," she told him as she walked off to take another order.
And this is the kind of moment you know must have happened because just was hanging on for more than just the sex:
Brian lay there and continued to smoke. After several minutes, he quietly said "Deb."
Realizing that Brian was talking to him Justin turned his head to look at him.
"Deb," Brian said, clearing his throat, "She buys them for me."