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xie_xie_xie ([info]xie_xie_xie) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2008-06-20 14:34:00

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Entry tags:challenge in two parts

Graphic Number 3: "Travelin' Man" (Amnesty)
Title: Travelin’ Man
Author: fansee
Timeline: Post-513
Rating: R for language
Warnings, if any: None.
Author's notes: A ficlet inspired by [info]not_yet_defined’s wonderful graphic and beta’d, as always, by chering
Graphic: #3




“Where are you?”

“On the bus.”

“Very funny, twat. Where the fuck is the bus?”

“We’re crossing a bridge. I can see tall buildings in the distance. I’m guessing that’s Philadelphia….My seat mate says it is Philadelphia. He says we’re on the Betsy Ross Bridge. (Thanks.)”

“If you’d flown home, you’d be here now.”

“We’ve had this conversation already. I’m not having it again.”

“When did you get on the bus?”

“Around eight.”

“And it’s after 10:00 now.”

“Yup, it’s 10:03 p.m. And it doesn’t matter. The Pittsburgh bus doesn’t leave for another two hours. I have plenty of time to make it. No problem.”

“Do you have the credit card I gave you? Do you have it with you?”

“Yes, dear. I always carry it in case of an emergency.”

“This is an emergency. I want you to catch a taxi to the airport as soon as you get off that fucking bus and use my Visa to get yourself on the next flight to Pittsburgh.”

“That is a totally absurd idea. For all you know, that might get me to the Pitts later than the bus. I’ll be there at 6:30 tomorrow morning.”

“Depending on traffic.”

“There’s not going to be traffic between Philadelphia and Pittsburgh. If we were going to get stuck in traffic, it would have been between New York and here. You are being ridiculous.”

“There is nothing ridiculous about wanting you underneath me right now, with my dick up your ass. I should have my hand around your hard, wet dick, and you should be begging me to jerk you off. And that’s what would be happening if you weren’t so fucking stubborn.”

(No, it’s not my mother.)

“What?”

“My seat mate just asked me if I was talking to my mother. (It’s my boyfriend.) And wanting to be independent…wanting to pay my own way…that’s called being an adult and taking responsibility for yourself.”

“What the fuck! So you pay me the bus fare, and I spend another $100 to get you to Pittsburgh in the time it’s taking the bus to get to Philadelphia.”

“It’s $200, and at least another hour.”

“Big fucking difference. Tell me…say it out loud…tell me that you want to be sitting on a bus in another hour or so. Tell me you prefer that to having your dick in my mouth, all nice and hot and wet, sucking you off just the way you like it.”

“I can’t say that, Brian.”

“You bet your ass you can’t, because you’d be lying. Are you getting hard? Don’t fucking lie to me. Is thinking about my dick and what I can do with it making you hard?”

“Maybe.”

“Maybe?”

“O.K. Yes. A little.”

“Uh-huh. Where are you now?”

“Um…looks like we’re getting to downtown. We’re pulling off the Expressway. (Thanks.) My seatmate says we’re on Vine Street now, a block or two from the station.”

“Where you will sit for two hours, then ride for another six hours. So altogether…probably eight, nine hours before we fuck.”

“O.K. I get it.”

“You do?”

“Yeah. Next time you can pay for the difference between the bus and the plane.”

“Where are you now?”

“I’m getting off the bus.”

“O.K.”

“I have to get my bag now. Later.”

“Wait. Don’t hang up.”

“What the hell?”

“Look through the door into the station, because this is the first and only time you’ll ever see Brian Kinney waiting for you in a bus station.”



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[info]kata_ny
2008-06-20 04:47 pm UTC (link)
Look through the door into the station, because this is the first and only time you’ll ever see Brian Kinney waiting for you in a bus station.”
*giggles like a lunatic*
that cought me by total surprise!!!!so great!!!!i loved it!!

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[info]not_yet_defined
2008-06-20 05:32 pm UTC (link)
omg, i had the same reaction...i think fansee fixed me after xie broke me. :D

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[info]kata_ny
2008-06-20 05:36 pm UTC (link)
yay for the same reaction!!we are reaction to fics soulmates!!
so that is a win-win situation:D

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:15 pm UTC (link)
Thank you both for your comments. [info]xie_xie_xie broke me, too. FanSee

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[info]qafcracked
2008-06-20 05:02 pm UTC (link)
THAT WAS THE BEST SURPRISE EVER!

I was loving this fic for the humor and the dialogue the whole way through, but the end just put this into a whole separate category of awesome!

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:16 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much for the awesome comment. Much appreciated. FanSee

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[info]quirks4me
2008-06-20 05:03 pm UTC (link)
OMG that ending caught me by surprise too! That was great, actually made me get a bit teary-eyed...or maybe it's my allergies. :P

I also loved that his seat-mate asked if it was his mother right after Brian was going on about his dick in Justin's ass haha.

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:18 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for commenting. Sorry it took me so long to reply. RL can be a bitch. FanSee

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[info]sjmpets
2008-06-20 05:10 pm UTC (link)
“Look through the door into the station, because this is the first and only time you’ll ever see Brian Kinney waiting for you in a bus station."
i haven't laughed all day. this was perfect. that is so brian.

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:20 pm UTC (link)
You know Brian would hate spending even five minutes in a Greyhound Bus Station! 'Greater love hath no man." FanSee

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[info]not_yet_defined
2008-06-20 05:32 pm UTC (link)
“Look through the door into the station, because this is the first and only time you’ll ever see Brian Kinney waiting for you in a bus station.”

i was so not expecting that, i actually squeed out loud with delight.

thank you for this fansee.

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:21 pm UTC (link)
You are very welcome. I apologize for taking so long to respond. (Bad FanSee. Bad bad bad.)

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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-06-20 05:33 pm UTC (link)
OH! Hee! Great ending, and I enjoyed the whole thing. :-D

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:22 pm UTC (link)
Glad you liked it. Fun to write. FanSee

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[info]noteverything
2008-06-20 06:12 pm UTC (link)
Very very cute and it works wonderfully with NY's graphic.

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:25 pm UTC (link)
As soon as I saw the graphic, the story was right there, but I didn't get a chance to type it out before the deadline. When [info]xie_xie_xie announced the amnesty, I immediately put fingers to keys. FanSee

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[info]jule1122
2008-06-20 06:17 pm UTC (link)
One of the best last lines ever! I'm smiling almost as much as Justin.

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:27 pm UTC (link)
Glad it amused you. Thanks for commenting. FanSee the Tardy

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-06-20 06:36 pm UTC (link)
FANSEEEEEEEEE!

This was super adorable and I love the ending, while I wasn't expecting it, OF COURSE Brian was there. hee

The teasing phone sex was hottt too. ;)

Excellent fic for the gorgeous banner.

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:29 pm UTC (link)
You liked it, huh?

It was fun to write, too.

I apologize for taking so long to respond but RL.... FanSee

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[info]passing_through
2008-06-20 06:57 pm UTC (link)
I loved this! Funny and hot and a great surprise at the end. I also love how you told the story using only dialog.

Very well done ♥

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-05 11:30 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for the great comment. Much appreciated. FanSee

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[info]notreallyme10
2008-06-20 09:05 pm UTC (link)
This story is just so much fun! You really made me smile... for the entire fic! Thanks!

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-07 09:39 pm UTC (link)
Glad it amused you. Thanks for commenting. FanSee

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[info]outlander
2008-06-20 10:19 pm UTC (link)
I'm grinning so hard, my molars are showing. The end was such a wonderful surprise.

(No, it’s not my mother.)
LMAO.

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-07 09:39 pm UTC (link)
Your molars are very attractive.

Glad it amused you. Fun to write. FanSee

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[info]rosy5000
2008-06-20 10:37 pm UTC (link)
“Look through the door into the station, because this is the first and only time you’ll ever see Brian Kinney waiting for you in a bus station.”

OMG! I just grinned like a crazy fool reading that line. Totally NOT what I expected! :D

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-07 09:40 pm UTC (link)
NO ONE would expect to see Brian in a bus station. FanSee

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[info]snowmore
2008-06-21 08:23 am UTC (link)
I loved the conversation back and forth, but the best part was Brian Kinney's attendance in the bus station!!

*sqqqqqquuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssss* :D

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Travelin' Man
(Anonymous)
2008-07-07 09:55 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for the major squee!! FanSee

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[info]besamislabios
2008-06-21 09:36 am UTC (link)
This was great fun to read.

(No, it’s not my mother.)
lol

Loved the ending, unexpected and it made me smile. :)))))))

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Travelin' Man
[info]fansee
2008-07-27 04:44 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much for commenting...oh, so long ago! I apologize for the delay in responding. FanSee

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[info]tootiredtosleep
2008-06-21 12:25 pm UTC (link)
So damned cute! Loved it. This is one I think I will have to save to read again... and again... and again .

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Travelin' Man
[info]fansee
2008-07-27 04:46 pm UTC (link)
This is one I think I will have to save to read again... and again... and again.

Thank you for the lovely comment. Very encouraging!

FanSee, apologizing for taking so long to respond.

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[info]testdog65
2008-06-21 09:07 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I didn't see that coming! This was a really fun read. :D

~Ellen

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Travelin' Man
[info]fansee
2008-07-27 04:48 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I took SO long to respond, and I really really appreciate the comment. On top of that, I missed your birthday. Bad FanSee bad bad bad. Hope it was wonderful. FanSee

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[info]cindybaby
2008-06-22 10:14 am UTC (link)
LOL!

GREAT ending. Perfect!

Nicely done.

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Travelin' Man
[info]fansee
2008-07-27 04:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for commenting. I do appreciate it, despite how long it's taken me to respond. FanSee

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[info]pendulumchanges
2008-06-22 06:18 pm UTC (link)
omg *squeeee!!!!* Love, love, love it!!!

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Travelin' Man
[info]fansee
2008-07-27 04:51 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much for commenting. I am so tardy in acknowledging your comment, but that doesn't mean I don't appreciate it. My apologies. FanSee

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Re: Travelin' Man
[info]pendulumchanges
2008-08-01 07:30 pm UTC (link)
no worries! I love getting replies to comments I leave on fics, especially days or even weeks after I left them because it gives me a good excuse (and the link!) to go back and read fics again that I loved the first time through :) Just read it again and it's just as fun the second time around.

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[info]herefordroad
2008-06-22 11:55 pm UTC (link)
lol!!!! priceless ending:

“Look through the door into the station, because this is the first and only time you’ll ever see Brian Kinney waiting for you in a bus station.”

jeannie

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Travelin' Man
[info]fansee
2008-07-27 04:52 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for commenting. Sorry it's taken me so long to respond! FanSee

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[info]lougenessis
2008-12-20 07:32 pm UTC (link)
*Clapping my hands like a fool* Brian just couldn't wait for his Sunshine. Fun and romantic story, thanks!

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[info]court1429
2009-01-03 02:35 pm UTC (link)
Fansee! When these were posted, I think I decided to save these fics for later and then forgot to read them. I'm so glad I remembered. Better late than never, right? ;)

This was fabulous. Totally IC and perfect dialogue that led up to a surprising, but not really when you think about it/him, ending. Thanks so much! ♥

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[info]court1429
2009-01-03 02:36 pm UTC (link)
And fit beautfully with Ny's graphic, too.

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[info]teardrop09
2009-02-04 05:25 pm UTC (link)
the last line makes me grin SO MUCH!

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