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The Porn Santa (smutmas_mod) wrote in merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-05 08:00:00

Entry tags:

fic, harry/charlie

Merry Smutmas, gatewaygirl!

To: gatewaygirl
From: seshat

Title: Aftermath
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Harry/Charlie
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters in, or associated with, the Harry Potter books.
Summary: Harry visits Charlie in Romania to get away from it all
Author's notes: Happy Christmas, Gateway Girl, I really hope you enjoy the fic. :D And as always, thank you to my betas.

Aftermath

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	incidental_fire 2007-12-05 01:18 pm UTC (link)
	Mmm, very hot! I liked that at first Charlie didn't want Harry to visit him, that they didn't become "best buddies" immediately. I also thought it was quite realistic that Charlie would have been uncomfortable with the idea that he wanted Harry, given his status as Ron's friend/Ginny's boyfriend, and the age different. Very interesting, and again, very hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:44 pm UTC

	entrenous88 2007-12-05 01:45 pm UTC (link)
	Very sexy barn sex! I love seeing Charlie star in a pairing, and this combination of him and Harry worked so nicely here. They move fast, the two of them, but considering how cute and eager Harry is, and how hot for Harry Charlie is, who came blame them? Lots of fun! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:45 pm UTC

	snegurochka_lee 2007-12-05 02:50 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, hi there, Charlie, you sexy beast! :)) "Have you done this before? With a man?" moans Oh, experienced!Charlie teaching some sweet young thing in the rules of the Gay gets me every time, srsly. This was wonderful. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

entrenous88, 2007-12-05 02:55 pm UTC

snegurochka_lee, 2007-12-05 03:18 pm UTC

entrenous88, 2007-12-05 03:26 pm UTC

bewarethesmirk, 2007-12-05 03:10 pm UTC

snegurochka_lee, 2007-12-05 03:21 pm UTC

secretsolitaire, 2007-12-06 03:40 am UTC

snegurochka_lee, 2007-12-06 04:54 am UTC

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:45 pm UTC

	hpuckle 2007-12-05 02:51 pm UTC (link)
	Oooo, loved this. My first Harry/Charlie I think... very hot! xxx (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:46 pm UTC

bewarethesmirk
2007-12-05 03:09 pm UTC (link)

Holyfuck. I tend to avoid Weasley slash in general. I'm not sure exactly why that is, and this fic just shows what I'm missing.

Jesus, this was all kinds of hot. I love the semi-public sex/exhibitionism. And I loved that Charlie thought he'd done some great wrong, when Harry wanted it, too. I love that set-up. And the dirty talk? Nnnngggh. And I love, again, that Harry was the one who wanted intercourse.

I love how the dragons respond to the lubrication spell. :D

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florahart, 2007-12-05 05:38 pm UTC

gatewaygirl, 2007-12-05 11:11 pm UTC

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:47 pm UTC

	snarry_fan7 2007-12-05 03:24 pm UTC (link)
	Very hot and I like that Charlie warmed up to the idea of having Harry there and I like the progression of everything. Excellent work!~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:48 pm UTC

	envinyatar15 2007-12-05 05:10 pm UTC (link)
	Hotness, with an excellent set-up - very realistic, the way Charlie reacts. Good job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:48 pm UTC

	aqua_chuu 2007-12-05 06:00 pm UTC (link)
	Mmmm, that's very hot. Yay for barn!smut! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:48 pm UTC

	sciencegeek 2007-12-05 08:36 pm UTC (link)
	Yay! Awesome fic - I love this pairing happy sigh (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:48 pm UTC

	emiime 2007-12-05 09:59 pm UTC (link)
	Oh yes, very very nice! Your Charlie is HOT, and your Harry is so sweet, and I love them so much together! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 06:48 pm UTC

gatewaygirl
2007-12-05 11:08 pm UTC (link)

Squee!

I love this! The set-up of the two of them is great, with Charlie first just having Harry stay as a favor, then realizing it might not be so bad, and then that it might be good. Charlie feeling that he should have known Fred better is such a marvelous, sparse bit of defining his place in the family.

And the hot! Gah! I started to read this (not really intentionally) this morning, and when I got to the scene with both of them drunk, when Charlie straddled Harry's lap and pushed a hand up inside his shirt, I realized I'd be rushing if I continued, so I finished that scene and left the story to return to after work. I loved that scene, and Harry's response to Charlie's apology. ("I think you will. In fact, I know you will." ) :-D

Harry is a brilliant combination of inexperienced and reasonably self-confident, and the mix makes the encounter in the barn (and his turn-about on Charlie!) extra sexy.

I had to go look up my request after I read this, because it was on target for so many things I like, but I couldn't remember what I'd asked for. Wonderful job!

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gatewaygirl, 2008-01-13 10:36 pm UTC

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-14 06:31 am UTC

	gatewaygirl 2007-12-05 11:13 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, yeah -- I implied it a lot, but just realized that I didn't actually say.... Thank you, mystery author! (Reply to this)

	heather11483 2007-12-05 11:56 pm UTC (link)
	gurgle I'm picky about my Harry slash and have never read this pairing, but geesh. fans self A great setup, good characterisations, and just. Smoking. Nice. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:48 pm UTC

	josan 2007-12-06 01:22 am UTC (link)
	What a nice hot read for a cold winter's night! ;-) (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:49 pm UTC

ex_gibson905
2007-12-06 02:05 am UTC (link)

Oh! This was nice ;).

Charlie was hot! I liked that this was from his perspective, that's not one we get to see that often.

I also liked bold and confident Harry. He wasn't entirely sure about the mechanics of it all, but he knew he wanted Charlie and that Charlie would kiss him again--nice!

I also got a kick out of Harry knowing that Charlie had been watching him. Makes me wonder how much of what he was doing was a performance ;).

Nice work all around .

Thanks for sharing ;)

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ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:53 pm UTC

	erikdesoir 2007-12-06 03:37 am UTC (link)
	O. Mai. Gawd. Hot barn sex and dirty talk? Charlie, you whore. This was awesome, sweetheart! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:53 pm UTC

	secretsolitaire 2007-12-06 03:44 am UTC (link)
	Oh, Charlie. You yummy man. licks This was a fun read, and very hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:54 pm UTC

	hambares 2007-12-06 04:23 am UTC (link)
	"That was amazing." - I agree! It was amazing and so hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:54 pm UTC

	mimiheart 2007-12-06 04:42 am UTC (link)
	This is my favorite lesser-seen pairing. And it was really well done. I'm happy now. :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:54 pm UTC

	chiralove 2007-12-06 05:43 am UTC (link)
	Mmmm wow, loved this! Sweet and hot and fabulous! :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:56 pm UTC

	rickey_a 2007-12-06 05:55 am UTC (link)
	this was yummy and hot oh Charlie's a good teacher (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:56 pm UTC

	maple_mahogany 2007-12-06 06:46 am UTC (link)
	Mmm - I think everyone should get their own personal Charlie. Thank you for blushing, but not utterly fumbling, Harry. He was adorable. (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:58 pm UTC

r_grayjoy
2007-12-06 10:51 am UTC (link)

Nice progression in the way Charlie views Harry throughout the story here, from an unwelcome nuisance to a comfortable companion, and from a relatively innocent kid to an attractive, sexual adult. Charlie-as-teacher is hot, but it's also great to see Harry holding his own.

Harry stayed quiet for a while, then grinned. "Bet you took all morning thinking that through, didn't you?"

Bwahaha, go Harry. ::wicked grin::

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ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:58 pm UTC

	florida_minxie 2007-12-06 02:05 pm UTC (link)
	I love Harry and Charlie and this, THIS, showed exactly why. What a wonderfully delightful tale! (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:58 pm UTC

	ariadneelda 2007-12-06 04:04 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely and sexy! I loved your Charlie. And Harry. And the two of them together. g (Reply to this) (Thread)

ex_seshat577, 2008-01-13 07:59 pm UTC

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