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The Porn Santa ([info]smutmas_mod) wrote in [info]merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-03 16:00:00

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Entry tags:fic, severus/harry

Merry Smutmas, [info]odogoddess!

To: [info]odogoddess
From: [info]meri_oddities



Title: Healing
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Disclaimer: She owns it all, not me. But I bet Snape likes me better.
Summary: Harry has one more thing to do before he can sleep.
Warnings: Spoilers for DH
Author's notes: Takes place immediately after the last scene in DH, but before the epilogue.
Note 2: Many, many thanks to my betas, who will remain nameless until the reveal, but are no less appreciated. Any mistakes after their hard work are all my own fault.

Healing

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[info]svartalfur
2007-12-03 09:35 pm UTC (link)
Snape had that superior smirk on his face now, along with a smear of mustard.
Perfect!

That was incredibly hot. I love bottom!Snape, and Snape teaching Harry while bottoming is even better. What a wonderful way to bring Snape back. Thanks for sharing!

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[info]hambares
2007-12-03 09:48 pm UTC (link)
Vigin hot fumbling = love! I hope they get many more chances in the future to do more of the same (well maybe not the virgin part).

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[info]gingertart50
2007-12-03 09:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh my word, that was hot! Excellent work, mystery writer!

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[info]chazpure
2007-12-03 10:30 pm UTC (link)
Mmm...yummy!

"Put your back into it, boy," Snape ordered, his legs wrapping around Harry's waist, his hands tightening on Harry's arse. "Move it."

Hee! I love PushyBottom!Snape! *G*

Great job!

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Lines that I loved reading
[info]josan
2007-12-03 10:39 pm UTC (link)
For all that the words said no, the lust in Snape's eyes said yes.

***Snicker.


"I want," Harry gasped out, pleading.

"Yes." Snape's hand cupped Harry through his jeans

***They both want. I liked that.


Harry ran a hand across Snape's prominent ribs. "Eat."

***lovely image that.

Snape had that superior smirk on his face now, along with a smear of mustard.

***I know the sex was hot, but this image made my knees weak!

"It was my pleasure." Snape actually smiled at him, looking relaxed and maybe even happy.

Harry leaned up and kissed him. "Mine, too."

I love the way you dealt with the infamous epilogue (which I love) in a open-handed way.

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[info]lesyeuxverts
2007-12-03 10:52 pm UTC (link)
Oh wow, so fabulous! I loved the bond, and the way that Snape survived, and the infirmary smut, and oh, just everything. Brilliant story!

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2007-12-03 10:53 pm UTC (link)
Yes, see. This is what should've happened at the end of DH. Harry going back to get Snape's body -- only to find him gone or still alive. It'd have been so cool if he had vanished. That would have been a much better ending. *nods* Anyway, I'll never satisfy my issues with canon here.

I like the idea of a life force for renewing Snape. It'd be amazing if this could work even if he was dead (just having died.) I also like the intimate connection it created between H and S. I wonder what about the nature of the bond creates arousal, but I'm not complaining!

I was struck wrongly at first that Madam Pomfrey would just suggest Snape to die, but then I figured out it's due to the fact that she's one of the few people who knew--aside from Dumbledore--that Snape was working for Dumbledore still. It was just different to read, but entirely believable and probably more canon compatible.

I love desperate sex. "I want you so much."....
"Then have me." Sohotandperfect. The lines between passion and eroticism and need and sex really blur for me in this ship, they all spill into each other. And an optimistic ending (EWE?)

And this was hilarious:
If he found it strange to find his master naked and in bed with the former Headmaster, the elf gave no sign of it.

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[info]quill_lumos
2007-12-03 11:14 pm UTC (link)
Loved this! Harry and Severus exploring sex together was great. I loved the way that you gave Sev a such a wonderful reprieve and hope for the future for them both.

Thanks for sharing

Lucie

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[info]torino10154
2007-12-03 11:30 pm UTC (link)
That was very very hot indeed. Bottom!Snape, both inexperienced. GUH!

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[info]irana
2007-12-04 12:33 am UTC (link)
Perfect! Just what I needed to read just now.

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[info]mimiheart
2007-12-04 12:39 am UTC (link)
yum

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[info]snarry_fan7
2007-12-04 01:30 am UTC (link)
Lovely work! I love the "Unhook us. Now." line from Snape. Very hot and I too love bottom!Snape.~Sophia

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[info]garnet_80
2007-12-04 01:53 am UTC (link)
Closing his eyes, Snape seemed to brace himself. "Just tell me. The Malfoys?"

"All survived."

Snape let out a sigh, and nodded. "Thank you."

Oooh! Not only did I just melt a little, but that really peaks my interest as to just what Snape's interest in the Malfoys is - and perhaps which of the Malfoy's it is that is interested.

"Put your back into it, boy," Snape ordered...
I'm laughing so hard, it hurts.

And you've brought up a really good point. Why DIDN'T anyone think to go back for Snape's body. Inconsiderate bastards.

Well done, mystery author.

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[info]odogoddess
2007-12-04 02:14 am UTC (link)
Hee! I love it. :) Two of the things that bothered me most about DH was 1) Harry has this 'saving people thing' and yet, he didn't try to save Snape, and 2) Hermione has been bending over backward to help everyone throughout the series, even house elves and she's always respected Snape, and yet she doesn't even try to dig through her bag of tricks to find dittany or try to use a spell to stop the bleeding? That really stretched credibility for me, when JKR herself established those two personality traits for the kids. This fic rather nicely redresses those issues and provides a nice rationale for some lovely first time sex. Snape being shy and bashful yet bossy is icing on the cake (or is that mustard on the face?). :)

Thank you! I enjoyed this very, very much. :D Happy Holidays!

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[info]celandineb
2007-12-04 03:01 am UTC (link)
The perfect tone for this story -- not too heavy or intense, hot yet somehow light. Great read!

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[info]schemingreader
2007-12-04 03:14 am UTC (link)
That was very nice work! I liked the way you worked in the recipient's kinks. Good pacing, too.

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[info]lilyseyes
2007-12-04 03:24 am UTC (link)
Everyone seems to have already said all the good stuff - so I'll just say - Brilliant!

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(Anonymous)
2007-12-04 03:36 am UTC (link)
Sweet and practical; I love that it was Harry clinging. Well done!

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[info]cluegirl
2007-12-04 04:19 am UTC (link)
D'awwwww! I love me some clingy Harry, truly I do.

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[info]entrenous88
2007-12-04 04:32 am UTC (link)
Ha! Snape's demands for Harry to put his back into it were hilarious. Lots of hotness with Snape being the pushy bottom, and plenty of warm cuteness with Harry clinging to the bond.

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[info]secretsolitaire
2007-12-04 04:43 am UTC (link)
Delicious! I had a feeling Harry might be holding onto the bond, and who could blame him? Nice fic, mystery author. :-)

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[info]ziasudra
2007-12-04 05:01 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is so nice! You completed my canon for me by having the trio go back for Snape's body. And having Harry "hooked" onto Snape is such a yummy icing on the cake. Harry is so needy here, and your first time Snape totally has my heart ;)

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[info]gaycrow
2007-12-04 08:19 am UTC (link)
This is a charming story. I can see the two of them having many more "business" meetings. :D

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[info]vissy
2007-12-04 09:50 am UTC (link)
Mmm, virgins and sandwiches and magical bonds...and proper attention to Snape's belly!

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[info]mcmuffins_js
2007-12-04 01:06 pm UTC (link)
Put your back into it, boy! hahahahahahaha! Great stuff. I love, too, that they had that little talk at the end... all is not perfectly well just because they had sex!

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[info]aqua_chuu
2007-12-04 03:54 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm, very nice and sexy. Great stuff!

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[info]envinyatar15
2007-12-04 04:20 pm UTC (link)
I really like your Severus - softer from how he's been previously portrayed in canon, but still very gruff and in charge. I like your version of how Severus might have been saved, too - the healing bond and the life force curling around Harry is a great plot device. Good job!

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[info]simons_flower
2007-12-04 06:48 pm UTC (link)
Great job!

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[info]tgin
2007-12-04 06:57 pm UTC (link)
That was very hot! I love pushy Bottom!Snape. Great job!

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[info]alisanne
2007-12-04 07:37 pm UTC (link)
Wow! Great way to bring Snape back, and the sex was sizzling. Well done. :)

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[info]cblue9
2007-12-05 01:59 am UTC (link)
Loved the idea of an healing bond as a plot! The idea of Harry holding to the bond warmth just to not let go of old Snape is delicious.
And, damn, even bottoming Snape is pushy! "Put your back into it," indeed. *LOL*

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[info]zephyr_macabee
2007-12-05 02:40 am UTC (link)
Excellent! I wonder who told Snape how wonderful bottoming is?

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[info]slashpine
2007-12-05 04:26 am UTC (link)
Wonderful!

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[info]lalaith_niniel
2007-12-05 06:53 pm UTC (link)
Oh, fabulous story! I love how pushy Snape is while on the bottom. He's just continuing his instruction of Harry, I suppose.

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[info]maddiec24
2007-12-05 11:56 pm UTC (link)
Amazing story! You fixed DH, and there's virgin Snape *and* Harry... I love this so much!

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[info]coffee_n_cocoa
2007-12-06 06:39 am UTC (link)
This was really enjoyable! I loved how you brought Snape back, and the smexxing was both wonderful and hot!

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[info]atdelphi
2007-12-07 02:09 am UTC (link)
Lovely!

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[info]verdenia
2007-12-11 02:39 pm UTC (link)
Wow. Looks like a lot of people are taking the "start each day fresh" approach to reading. I enjoyed this SO much! ;D

I took notes starting with this hilarity:

OMG *smirk-giggle*: Harry was on the verge of exploding, too, but probably not in quite the same way.

While he didn't think it was possible to die of a hard-on, he wasn't completely certain of it.

In regards to the finale of the sex scene:
alkjfdhljkdf! OMG HOT. Aiiiiie.

Hee. Lovely idea with the bond, and Harry appreciating its warmth, and both of them virginal, pushy-bottom!Snape... Joy. ;D

*memories* XD

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[info]randomlysane
2007-12-13 02:10 am UTC (link)
I like that Snape was still alive when Harry went to find him. You didn't feel the need to deal with antidotes and what-not, just the simple fact that he hadn't died yet. That was refreshing.

I like the characterizations here. I don't usually like bottom!Snape, but this one worked for me, I guess because they were both virgins and Snape was still bossy. LOL.

Great little fic!

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[info]psych_nut
2007-12-15 03:20 am UTC (link)
I really enjoyed this. Some of the lines were very amusing, I like bottom!Snape, and I really like the way you described Sanpe's lifeforce and the comfort it gave Harry.

My one little nitpick is that I wasn't sure why Harry was wearing jeans in the infirmary? Wouldn't he have bene given other clothing?

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[info]marinelle
2007-12-17 05:02 am UTC (link)
I liked it very much.

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[info]sensine
2007-12-26 01:59 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful, hot, and funny!
"Put your back into it, boy," Snape ordered, Ho ho ho!
I'd love to see how this developed after the war.

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[info]bridgetmkennitt
2007-12-28 05:36 am UTC (link)
Lovely! I always enjoy a good bottom!Snape story.

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[info]ships_harry
2008-01-01 11:25 pm UTC (link)
Mmm, yum. Loved them both virgins, figuring it out. Sexy as hell, too. I'm pretty fond of inadvertent bonds :D.

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[info]jillypooh
2008-01-02 04:09 am UTC (link)
Wonderful story! Severus is so perfect here! The teasing glimpses of the man he might be when he's not being a double agent are perfect.

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[info]fluffyllama
2008-01-03 06:13 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, this is lovely! Love how you went about it and their plans for the future. Mmm, I can pretend this is the real happy ending :D

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[info]ms_katonic
2008-01-03 11:39 pm UTC (link)
Inadvertant bonding and Snape not being dead! Brilliant! The hot Snarry sex is just a bonus, and you've nailed Snape's character.

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[info]sanfuturo
2008-01-04 05:55 am UTC (link)
Delightful! I love that Hermione did it, but Harry held on. Thanks for writing it!

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