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The Porn Santa (smutmas_mod) wrote in merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-30 18:00:00

Entry tags:

fic, harry/teddy, sirius/remus

Merry Smutmas, lizardspots!

To: lizardspots
From: violet_quill

Title: The Godfather Part II
Pairings: Harry/Teddy, Remus/Sirius
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This is a non-commercial transformative work based on worlds/characters copyrighted by JKR.
Summary: When Teddy digs into his father's past, he shares his findings with Harry, and what they discover dredges up Harry's memories of his own godfather, Sirius. The two of them begin to piece together a tangled web of past relationships that somehow continue to colour the present.
Warnings: Voyeurism, wanking, implied threesomes, sketchy uses of Pensieves
Author's Notes: I hope that you love this, Lizard! My special thanks to my beta and cheerleader, who shall remain nameless for the time being. Also despite the title, there is no "Part I" unless you consider it to be what this author read between the lines in Order of the Phoenix.

( The Godfather Part II )

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	josan 2007-12-31 12:50 am UTC (link)
	I wasn't sure about the pairing, but you made it work. As for all those sexual shenanigans...OMG! Peyton Place* galore! LOL! (* I'm really dating myself, here. LOL!) (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:46 am UTC

	gina87 2007-12-31 01:13 am UTC (link)
	Wow, great story! Harry/Teddy which is absolut love and Sirius/Remus with mention of James/Sirius/Remus. What could a girl want more?? But I was like "What, this is the end? I want more!" This was the story I was looking for since DH came out. Thank you mysterious author. (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:47 am UTC

	ex_modernlov612 2007-12-31 01:32 am UTC (link)
	That was fantastic! I've never read Harry/Teddy, or any story that features Teddy as a lead character for that matter, but something about this made me want to try something new. I am so glad I did, too! I really like your Teddy and the tangled web of past relationships was awesome. And I never knew Harry/Teddy could be so hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:47 am UTC

	timetiger 2007-12-31 02:40 am UTC (link)
	I liked some many things about this -- the wit, the threesome, the sex . . . (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:48 am UTC

	simons_flower 2007-12-31 03:31 am UTC (link)
	This should have felt totally wrong, but it wasn't. Harry probably could have been more creeped out by being seduced by Teddy, but I think at that point he'd seduced himself. I actually liked Percy in this, shockingly enough. And Harry and Percy made an odd sort of sense. Very nice. (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:49 am UTC

	tenshinochouwa 2007-12-31 04:27 am UTC (link)
	This was awesome - I loved all the parallels between Harry and Teddy. Also: Teddy wanking to Harry wanking to Sirius and Remus? Hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:49 am UTC

	(Anonymous) 2007-12-31 05:47 am UTC (link)
	damn, I am a sucker for Harry and his godfather OR his godson! (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:49 am UTC

nqdonne
2007-12-31 06:17 am UTC (link)

Hahahahhaha - that title is MADE OF WIN. *giggles* Generally, this whole thing is made of win - Harry/Teddy! And OMG HARRY/PERCY, I LOVE YOU.

All the little details are fabulous - Teddy working at Flourish and Blotts (such a Remus thing!), Andromeda & Kingsley (I love the idea - poor Andromeda being left alone but for Teddy was one of the more tragic things in DH, I think), and, well, everything about Percy :D

Lizard is going to die from happiness :)

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violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:50 am UTC

nqdonne, 2008-01-05 06:28 am UTC

	nahimana 2007-12-31 09:01 am UTC (link)
	Oh, lovely! I wasn't sure if I would enjoy this pairing, but with the way the plot developed and the characterizations (and hot sex) - how could I not?! Amazing fic! (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:50 am UTC

	gingertart50 2007-12-31 10:38 am UTC (link)
	This was great! Though the pairing almost put me off but I'm really glad I read it. Beautifully written and very witty, warm and erotic. Thank you. (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:50 am UTC

	shocfix 2007-12-31 12:01 pm UTC (link)
	That was all kinds of awesome and the line about Percy being good at crosswords was brilliant. And the ship actually worked, which I was dubious about, but I trusted lizard's squee, and WOW! (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:51 am UTC

	sansa1970 2007-12-31 01:17 pm UTC (link)
	Have new kink. Harry/Teddy. ;D Thanks so much for sharing this. I enjoyed it immensely. (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:51 am UTC

coffeejunkii
2007-12-31 03:07 pm UTC (link)

oooh. what an interesting take on canon! james plus remus and sirius is somewhat standard, but i hadn't really considered tonks as part of post-azkaban r/s. that almost makes me not want to tear my hair out when thinking about remus marrying tonks!

i also really liked your portrayal of harry's and teddy's relationship and all the discoveries they make about people they love and about each other in the course of this story.

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violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:52 am UTC

green_amber
2007-12-31 04:11 pm UTC (link)

Here via the

quibbler_report.

I had so much fun reading this. The tangled relationships are made of so much win. I love the scene where Harry catches Remus and Sirius, and the fact that James was involved with them too, and the suggestion that it may have been Harry's resemblance to James that made Sirius attracted to him, and I love the Andromeda/Kingsley, and Andromeda's motley knitting, and the Harry/Percy, and Remus/Tonks/Sirius, and Snape snarking from his portrait, and McGonagall, and the moment where Teddy looks like Remus and Sirius's kid and Harry becomes totally gaga over it, and yum, such awesomely hot smut. And this line made me laugh my ass off:

His mind kept wandering, and he suddenly realized that he was holding the same copy of Voyages With Vampires that he had been ten minutes ago. Finally he reached out and slid it into the "L" section of Fiction.

*dies*

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kaalee, 2007-12-31 08:59 pm UTC

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:53 am UTC

ms_katonic
2007-12-31 05:37 pm UTC (link)

I wasn't sure about the main pairing at first, but Lizard talked me into it, so I gave it a try, and OMG I'm glad I did! It's brilliant! I love the tangled history of past relationships, the Remus/Sirius with James joining in, then post-Azkaban R/S and Tonks joining in instead of being either competition or a replacement for Sirius, and how mutual bereavement makes so much more sense of Tonks's behaviour in HBP, the inappropriate yet hot bit where Harry saw R and S have sex and Sirius KNEW and didn't stop it, and then the present-day detective work, and the Teddy/Harry, and still being part of the Weasleys despite the break-ups, and bisexuality actually getting acknowledged for once, and just YES! I really really loved it. Thank you!

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violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:54 am UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-31 06:01 pm UTC (link)

oh wow ♥ I really like this! I've actually been craving Harry/Teddy after reading Potter Files and this was more than the perfect fit =). I love the way you wrote Tonks into the R/S relationship- actually makes me hate her a lot less hahaha. I love that Teddy points out that it was actually Kingsley that was the father figure and Harry more as a friend he could relate to.
Oh god and just the thought of S/R/J *GUH* ♥ lovely =)
-lille

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violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:54 am UTC

	urnesha 2007-12-31 08:23 pm UTC (link)
	Harry/Teddy squicked me at first but you made me like the pairing here. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:54 am UTC

	kaalee 2007-12-31 08:58 pm UTC (link)
	Wow, I was really drawn in by this! I really liked the way you developed this -- the way you explored Teddy's questions and his relationships with all of the adults around him. And, um, Harry. swallows Mraorw. Really well done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:56 am UTC

	literati 2007-12-31 11:38 pm UTC (link)
	This is fabulous! It's the Harry/Teddy story I've been waiting for! Bonus points as well for the Harry/Percy. ♥ (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:56 am UTC

	(Anonymous) 2008-01-01 08:41 am UTC (link)
	this was a great read! i love your writing style and kudos to you for being able to make remus/sirius/tonks and remus/sirius/james work out in ONE STORY! it was perfect and hot. and you slipped in percy...my god i think i love you. (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:57 am UTC

	(Anonymous) 2008-01-01 04:32 pm UTC (link)
	You know what? I just thought that i would love to read good Harry/Teddy story, and here it was, like made to me! Thank you for such interesting, good-written, enjoyable story! (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:57 am UTC

	(Anonymous) 2008-01-02 02:06 am UTC (link)
	I never thought I was gonna enjoy but, guess what? I completely and utterly did. The character development, the plot, Sirius (I loved his beyond the grave (sorta)love doctoring). Perfect. Plus you made me enjoy a fic without Draco in any role, which is quite the accomplishment :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:57 am UTC

	dora_the_nymph 2008-01-02 02:55 am UTC (link)
	Oh, I utterly love this, Harry is a dirty old man, so awesome! I love all the different connections nad suggestions of connections and the twist of Tonks being involved with Sirius and Remus all together. Just wonderfully done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:58 am UTC

	secretsolitaire 2008-01-02 04:03 am UTC (link)
	This was a great read! I wasn't so sure about the pairing either, but you made a convincing case for how much Harry and Teddy have in common, and I liked that you threw in the detail about Kingsley doing all the fatherly stuff and Harry being more of a friend. Loved the background Remus/Sirius (and the threesomes, whee!), and Percy was a charming addition as well. (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:58 am UTC

	ariadneelda 2008-01-02 08:22 am UTC (link)
	Harry/Teddy, yay! I've wanted to read this pairing and here it is! This was lovely, I really enjoyed it. :-) (Reply to this) (Thread)

violet_quill, 2008-01-05 12:58 am UTC

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