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The Porn Santa (smutmas_mod) wrote in merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-27 08:00:00

Entry tags:

fic, harry/draco

Merry Smutmas, emmagrant01!

To: emmagrant01
From: charlotteschaos

Title: Where the Naked Ladies Dance
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Harry/Draco, Blindfolded Rentboy/Draco (Theodore/Draco, Harry/Ginny, Draco/Wife implied)
Disclaimer: All characters belong to JK Rowling. I just play with them for a while.
Summary: Alone with Ginny after so many years once the children are away at school, Harry discovers that there's more to himself than he thought, and more to Draco too.
Warnings: Drug use, brothel
Author's notes: Thanks to betas P and S!

Where the Naked Ladies Dance

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	schemingreader 2007-12-27 02:38 pm UTC (link)
	In this whole, terrific, well-plotted story, with the good, well-described sex and the nice slow building affection, my favorite line of all was, "Look, Potter, there are bullies at Hogwarts," said Draco, finishing his absinthe. "And I fully intend that my son be one of them." It completely cracked me up! Just shows what kind of person I am. (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 06:14 pm UTC

	gatewaygirl 2007-12-27 03:37 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, brilliant. I love how Harry is so awkwardly and intently honest (when he's honest) and Malfoy's brittle prickliness. (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 06:15 pm UTC

	ex_ruffians4 2007-12-27 03:44 pm UTC (link)
	I loved this one. I really wish we would have found out why Draco was hurt so much by a past lover (or did this cover it? I sometimes skip things). In any case, this was lovely! (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 06:17 pm UTC

	josan 2007-12-27 03:47 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, my. Very nice. Loved the bit with the hand in the restaurant. Draco's pride and love of his son. Harry's willingness to admit to Gin that they were over. And the sex was hot too, but the plot...the plot was even better. (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 07:48 pm UTC

	winstonmom 2007-12-27 04:42 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks to you I have this huge idiot smile on my face. Your story has everything I love about the boys and a happy ending. Of course I love my Harry for being all protector of Draco and moving in with him. Great story, good sex, lovely boys...all together is the perfect combo. Emma is such a lucky girl. Thanks for sharing. (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 07:50 pm UTC

	fourth_rose 2007-12-27 08:07 pm UTC (link)
	applauds I liked this a lot - and I think you wrote my favourite Harry/Ginny breakup scene ever ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 07:52 pm UTC

kayleigh_jane
2007-12-27 08:23 pm UTC (link)

In the dead of night, there is a parlor that calls to men, men who are selected to hear the siren song, a subtle magic that calls and sings, luring the men from the beds of their wives and to a seedy part of London, a back alleyway between a burned out bookshop and a boarded up cafe. Underneath were the denizens of sin, a cornucopia of earthly and unearthly delights. Or, at least this was what the song promised.

These lines just drew me in, because they are like poetry with a whiff of Pratchett. Possibly the best lines in the fic. I also love your Draco, and the way you made him both confident and shy. Very nice fic!

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charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 07:51 pm UTC

	moit 2007-12-27 08:33 pm UTC (link)
	This fic was quite brilliant, not to mention hot. When Harry first found Draco at the brothel, it was like they were in a dream. (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 07:54 pm UTC

	ziasudra 2007-12-28 12:09 am UTC (link)
	My secret kink of rentboy fics won out my usual hesitance to read Draco fics, and what a gem I was rewarded with! Harry and Draco are very adult here, with adult issues to deal with and choices to make. You did a great job pacing the story and showing readers the forming of their relationship as the plot unfolded. I enjoyed reading this very much! (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:06 pm UTC

	tenshinochouwa 2007-12-28 04:38 am UTC (link)
	This was really great! I especially enjoyed the ending, with Draco being all cocky and the idea that the Manor would eat his wife. (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:11 pm UTC

	(Anonymous) 2007-12-28 04:59 am UTC (link)
	I liked the pace of the story, with the sex happening too fast, and Harry trying to get a word in edge-wise. Fabulous! ---aubergineautumn (Reply to this)

	anabellhenry 2007-12-28 05:05 am UTC (link)
	Oh, fun! I enjoyed Draco's warring insecurity and cockiness. And I adored it when Harry immediately fessed up to Ginny - "Because I've been fucking Malfoy." Thank you. (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:12 pm UTC

	(Anonymous) 2007-12-28 05:53 am UTC (link)
	What a great story. The ending was my favourite ;) Lillans (Reply to this)

	shaggy 2007-12-28 06:09 am UTC (link)
	Vulnerable Draco is very sweet. ♥ (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:15 pm UTC

	secretsolitaire 2007-12-28 01:31 pm UTC (link)
	I liked this a lot! Draco's combination of cockiness and insecurity seemed very IC to me, and I loved Harry's naive reactions to the brothel. (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:16 pm UTC

	emmagrant01 2007-12-28 03:10 pm UTC (link)
	Eee, I'm away from the internet for one day and miss this being posted! Off to read... :-D (Reply to this)

emmagrant01
2007-12-28 04:09 pm UTC (link)

Thank you so much for such a lovely story! I haven't read much H/D yet this exchange season, and so this was a great way to get started. I especially enjoyed the brothel scenes and the way Draco was alternately cool/snarky and vulnerable, both wanting Harry but not wanting anyone to know he did. Harry's genuine-ness was really nice too. They were great extensions of their canon selves.

I loved this line:

t was a little like having two wives, only of late, Draco was putting out quite a bit more and didn't seem to want any jewelry.

That was hilarious! Thank you so much, Secret Santa!

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charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 05:31 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-29 11:49 am UTC (link)

"Look, Potter, there are bullies at Hogwarts," said Draco, finishing his absinthe. "And I fully intend that my son be one of them."

This line cracked up my shit up, and the rest of the story does much the same! I knew I was in love from the first sex scene: Harry interrupts Draco getting fucked by the faceless man and then takes his place? So fucking dirty and kinky--and oh so very right. I love that you have Draco here in all his bitchy glory and all of his humanity intact as well. Those flashes of vulnerability, when he's not sexually rocking Harry's world, were lovely.

I love how you wrote a love story between two married men, both fathers and advanced in age, and still have them naturally acting like two insecure boys in love. That's what I love best about this pairing!

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	lesyeuxverts 2007-12-29 10:02 pm UTC (link)
	Fabulous! I love how Harry keeps pushing past Draco's vulnerabilities and I love the ending ... brilliant! (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 05:32 pm UTC

	vissy 2007-12-30 07:58 am UTC (link)
	The sex is brilliant but it's the dialogue that I really enjoyed here - snappy and awkward and funny and honest and crude and insecure - it's all there and all good! (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:17 pm UTC

	sugareey 2007-12-31 06:41 am UTC (link)
	I loved this whole brothel scandal. With all the rough, hot sex, to Draco's vulnerabilities and Harry taking a liking to him. Very well-written and I really enjoyed how suggestive and direct the dialogue was. Nice work! =D (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:19 pm UTC

	(Anonymous) 2007-12-31 02:19 pm UTC (link)
	This was awesome. I totally lost my heart to Draco. (Reply to this)

	celandineb 2008-01-02 01:03 am UTC (link)
	Draco's wanting-Harry-but-wanting-secrecy was just right here, and the sex was remarkably hot. g (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:20 pm UTC

	ships_harry 2008-01-02 03:07 am UTC (link)
	This? Was great. Also wildly hot sex. The blindfolded guy, and the loo-sex. a;lkj;felkjafdksadssdf. Draco was pretty much awesome, all prickly and cautious. (Reply to this) (Thread)

charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:21 pm UTC

kennahijja
2008-01-02 07:27 pm UTC (link)

Yay, brothelfic! :)

That was very hot, especially at the beginning, and the bathroom stall sex which gave me the very best of shivers.

There were moments when I felt Draco was more emotionally vulnerable than I prefer him (being fond of egomanic!littlebastard!Draco who'd rather raise all sorts of hell before fessing up that he can be hurt that way, but well, that's subjective preference), but it fit in the context of the story, and the way Harry and Draco dance around each other (and that brothel...) was delightful.

The ending itself made me excessively happy, especially
"Look, Potter, there are bullies at Hogwarts," said Draco, finishing his absinthe. "And I fully intend that my son be one of them."

Such a wonderful, in character line!

Good, extremely hot fic - thanks for sharing, mystery person.

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charlotteschaos, 2008-01-05 09:28 pm UTC

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