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The Porn Santa (smutmas_mod) wrote in merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-24 16:00:00

Entry tags:

fic, harry/sirius

Merry Smutmas, waccawheels!

To: waccawheels
From: the_con_cept

Title: Flicker
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Sirius
Disclaimer: Belongs to J.K. Rowling.
Notes: AU, doesn't follow books 5 on, for waccawheels for merry_smutmas!
Warnings: Rimming, voyeurism, watersports, and mild dog play.
Summary: When Sirius is accidentally hit by an untested new Weasleys' product, Harry shoulders the responsibility of taking care of the man, and ends up seeing something in his godfather he's never noticed before.

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	emiime 2007-12-24 10:09 pm UTC (link)
	This was incredibly sweet and breathtakingly hot at the same time. Awesome work, mystery author! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:34 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! I really felt like the beginning was clunky and awkward, so I'm very grateful you waded through to get to the more fun bits. g (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ex_froggie897 2007-12-24 11:13 pm UTC (link)
	Really sweet and hot fic. I don't like watersports as a rule, but it was really well written regardless. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:35 am UTC (link)
	Thank you very much! It was my first time trying watersports, so I wasn't sure how well I would pull it off. Funny enough, the sex bits were the easier bits to write--and the sweet bits. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	tenshinochouwa 2007-12-24 11:29 pm UTC (link)
	This was awesome, and really hot, too. I liked the idea of Harry and Sirius tearing apart Grimmauld Place and rebuilding it, and how Sirius reacted to Remus and Tonks, and of course the sex! (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept
2008-01-06 12:37 am UTC (link)

Thank you very much! I enjoyed the premise of renovating Grimmauld Place, but it was a bit hard because I've never done anything like that before! Mostly I had to guess and rely on friends who all told me, "Make sure they're frustrated! When you're redoing your house, you want to kill each other by the end, guaranteed!" And the Remus and Tonks bit was fun to write--and of course the sex! ; )

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	atdelphi 2007-12-25 04:37 am UTC (link)
	So sweet! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:37 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ciel_vert 2007-12-25 07:01 am UTC (link)
	I adored this! Harry trying to seduce Sirius was so sweet and incredibly hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:37 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! I love a Harry who isn't too shy about trying to get what he wants. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	(Anonymous) 2007-12-25 03:44 pm UTC (link)
	Guh!! I'm boneless. I'm speechless. P-please wait until I come up with more humanly words to thank you, my wonderful Secret Santa, but anyway... THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH THIS IS THE BEST OMG!!!!!!!1111!!1! joygasm -wacca (waccawheels (http://www.livejournal.com/users/waccawheels/)) (Reply to this)

	gina87 2007-12-25 11:06 pm UTC (link)
	hot...sooo hot (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:37 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	alisanne 2007-12-26 08:00 pm UTC (link)
	That was hilarious and very hot. Sirius really is a kid at heart, isn't he? g (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:39 am UTC (link)
	glomps you I've been wanting to say how much it meant to me that you read and liked this, even with all my percieved imperfections. Although I really do think the current version is cleaner--er, to a limited, 'plot, flow and readability' definition of cleaner, anyway. ; ) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	aqua_chuu 2007-12-26 09:20 pm UTC (link)
	Mmm, very hot. Harry's attempts at seducing Sirius were fantastic. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:39 am UTC (link)
	Thanks so much! I love a flirty Harry. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	fluffyllama 2007-12-27 01:27 am UTC (link)
	Eee! Lovely story, and incredibly hot stuff! <3 <3 <3 (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:40 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! It meant a lot to me that you enjoyed it. I think the current version is better edited, but I'm really glad you waded through the unnecessary backstory and some of the cheesier stuff to get to the fun parts. g (Reply to this) (Parent)

	mairi 2007-12-28 04:03 am UTC (link)
	For some reason, the line where Harry says "Take me, invisible man" cracked me up so bad. This was a fun fic, though! I really liked the character portrayals, and even the cameo from Rita Skeeter was interestingly written! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:41 am UTC (link)
	Oh, thank you! I really liked that line, though I fought with it a bit to get it to where it made sense. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	gatewaygirl 2007-12-28 05:05 am UTC (link)
	Oh god, I loved this! So hot, and so funny. Poor Tonks! And of course it takes weeks for the toilet to be delivered -- anyone who's done home renovations knows that. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:41 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! One of the hard things about this fic was that I've never done any home renovations, so I kept having to bug my friends and ask them what it was like. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ships_harry 2008-01-02 07:05 am UTC (link)
	Oh, bloody hell, that was hot. Filthy and kinda sweet, my other favourite kinda Sirius/Harry (I also like fucked up and completely wrong ;) ). Perhaps he should throw himself at Sirius and cry, "Take me, invisible man!" That line killed me, too :D. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	the_con_cept 2008-01-06 12:43 am UTC (link)
	hugs you I love Sirius/Harry for the wrongness that's kind of inherent, but yeah, I tried to keep it kind of light and fun and dirty. I'm really glad you liked it, since I was so frustrated with this fic. I made the newer version a bit lighter and took out anything emo and cleaned up the beginning, so now I think I've got what I was going for--fun and filthy sweet. g (Reply to this) (Parent)

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