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The Porn Santa (smutmas_mod) wrote in merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-14 16:00:00

Entry tags:

fic, harry/ron/seamus

Merry Smutmas, shocolate!

To: shocolate
From: entrenous88

Title: Between Friends
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Ron/Seamus
Disclaimer: The characters of Harry Potter belong to JK Rowling. No copyright infringement is intended by this work.
Summary: Harry looks forward to having drinks on Fridays with Seamus and Ron. Ron can prove he doesn't like snogging men. And Seamus may be a bit greedy.
Author's notes: Thanks to D and E for their beta assistance.

Between Friends

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	gina87 2007-12-14 09:47 pm UTC (link)
	Great, relly liked it!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:47 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	snegurochka_lee 2007-12-14 09:58 pm UTC (link)
	I liked this! Very nice and easy banter between friends. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:48 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you very much. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

shocfix
2007-12-14 10:37 pm UTC (link)

"You and Dean what?" Harry asked in a rush. "What about you and Dean?"

Seamus gave him an odd look. "We're going to a Cannons game in two weeks' time."

LOL!

"Not since school," Seamus said agreeably.

*gasp*

"Don't you want to..." Ron trailed off. "Prove you don't like kissing blokes?" he concluded at last.

VERY excellent plan.

"That's me, completely irresistible. Harry, how did you manage?"

"Don't know," Harry said truthfully.

*nods*

Canon.

Thank you SO much Mystery Person - no one has ever written Harry/Ron/Seamus for me before, and they simply fit together perfectly!

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	entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:49 pm UTC (link)
	I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed this! Many thanks for that, and for quoting some of the moments you liked. It was a pleasure to write this for you. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	trubbleclef 2007-12-14 10:56 pm UTC (link)
	GUH. This was just... completely amazing. Sexy and visceral and breathy and hot and yum!!! This is one of the few threesomes I enjoy, H/R being my OTP, and Seamus more than capable of holding his own against those two. Utterly wonderful! :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:50 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, what a lovely reaction! I'm glad you found this sexy, and that you enjoyed reading a threesome you already like in this story. Thank you so much for letting me know you liked this. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ex_gibson905 2007-12-15 12:38 am UTC (link)
	Oh such fun! I do so love me some griffyndor boys. :D Seamus was so confident and self-assured! Nice. Harry and Ron, being skeptical at first and then whole-heartedly into it! :D Nice work! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:51 pm UTC (link)
	Gryffindor boys really are lots of fun. :) I'm glad you liked the different reactions of the characters, from Seamus's easy confidence to Harry and Ron getting gradually drawn in to the action. Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

kaalee
2007-12-15 02:02 am UTC (link)

Oh, yay! *claps* I loved Seamus being so self-assured here and omg, the first kiss between Seamus & Ron in the bar was just sizzling. And the noteworthy bit about Seamus being the one to teach Lavender to kiss! :D This was a lot of fun -- well done!! ♥

one very tiny point out for when you re-post in your own journal: Seamus's last name is Finnigan, with an 'i' instead of 'e'. ♥

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entrenous88
2008-01-07 02:53 pm UTC (link)

Wheee, I'm so pleased you liked Seamus's assurance as well as that first kiss between Ron and Seamus at the pub. When I thought back on Seamus being the one to take Lavender to the Yule Ball, I just had to slip in something about how both Seamus and Ron kissed that same girl. Thank you for your reply, and also for pointing out that "Finnigan" -- I don't know how I missed that one. :)

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	rickey_a 2007-12-15 02:20 am UTC (link)
	"Fuck, the two of you are hot like that," Seamus murmured. Why yes, Seamus, they are! mmmm delicious fic! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:53 pm UTC (link)
	Ha, yes, the hotness of Harry/Ron is inspiring to many! Thanks so much. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	snarry_fan7 2007-12-15 03:51 am UTC (link)
	Very nice and hot. An excellent threesome. Lovely work.~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:54 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you very much! I'm really pleased to know you liked this. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	gatewaygirl 2007-12-15 04:29 am UTC (link)
	Seamus gave him a curious look. "Not just you. I meant you, you and Harry." His expression became more puzzled. "You mean to say, you never?" "No," Harry answered, looking away from studying Ron. "Never," Ron added with an air of finality. Then he bit his lower lip like he was troubled by something. Oh, this was marvelous! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:55 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you very much! I'm glad to know that moment in particular caught your attention -- it's always fun to sketch out two characters finally noticing something more than friendship between them. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	emmagrant01 2007-12-15 05:29 am UTC (link)
	Oh, I loved this! Great job. :-D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:55 pm UTC (link)
	Many thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed this fic. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	cork 2007-12-15 05:34 pm UTC (link)
	MMmmmm, this was just wonderful. Great work, mystery author! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:56 pm UTC (link)
	beams Thank you very much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	chiralove 2007-12-15 07:52 pm UTC (link)
	Fabulous depiction of the boys' personalities and the relationships between them - and oh, so hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:57 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much for that! I'm glad to know you found the story well-focused on the characters' personalities as well as the hotness. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	secretsolitaire 2007-12-15 08:26 pm UTC (link)
	Eee, this was charming!! I loved that first kiss between Ron and Seamus (yowza), and your dialogue was excellent. :-) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:58 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, I'm so glad you liked this! The first kiss between Ron and Seamus was a favorite moment of mine in this fic, so it's lovely to hear you enjoyed that. Many thanks for that, and for your kind comment about the dialogue. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	celandineb 2007-12-16 06:16 am UTC (link)
	Hot and sweet, beautiful confusion well-resolved -- hurrah for Seamus! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 02:59 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! It's great to know you found it both hot and sweet. And yes, yay for Seamus's persistence! :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	estioe 2007-12-16 04:34 pm UTC (link)
	Wow, that was great! I love how you wrote all three men. So IC. Just perfect. :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 03:00 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! It's so great to hear that you found the depictions to be in-character. Glad you enjoyed this! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	hpuckle 2007-12-16 05:40 pm UTC (link)
	Mmm... I have a definite thing for Harry/Ron/Seamus. This was wonderful... so hot. xxx (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 03:01 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, I'm so glad you liked this, particularly as you enjoy this threesome. Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	maple_mahogany 2007-12-16 09:14 pm UTC (link)
	flails I adore this threesome! Greedy, slutty Seamus is fantastic. pets him I love how he played them. Harry was so insecure and unsure and Ron was indignant and ready to dare. I enjoyed the head-holding-while-kissing and that they all enjoyed watching each other, without any jealousy. This was a very fun read - thanks! (Reply to this) (Thread)

entrenous88
2008-01-07 03:04 pm UTC (link)

Wheeee, thank you so much for all your kind comments and your flailing! :D It's fantastic to know that you liked Seamus here, his keen desire for the other characters and how he maneuvered the situation to his liking. It's also lovely to hear that you found the lack of jealousy with the characters a positive element; in this situation, with the friendship between them and the newness of it all, I thought they would enjoy seeing every action that takes place, even the particular ones in which they aren't directly participating.

Many thanks!

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	ulreyn 2007-12-16 10:24 pm UTC (link)
	Yay! That was fun! g (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 03:04 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you liked this. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	glockgal 2007-12-24 04:23 pm UTC (link)
	That was so much cute and adorable and oh, so Gryffindor! I loved the dialogue between the boys because it was so easy and casual and very delightful to imagine. And the sex? YUM YUM YUM!! My god, I love drunken stumbling and fumbling sex! It's always so much better to read about than to do for real, ahahahahah. Especially when it's three boys. GUH. <3 <3 (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 03:06 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, I'm thrilled that you liked these sexy-fun-times with the Gryffindor boys! Man, I love drunken sex too, especially with boys like this (hahaha, much better to read about than to participate in), so I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed this depiction of it. Many thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

kennahijja
2007-12-29 08:27 pm UTC (link)

What an awesome fic! I loved it, from the boys night out together to the kissing dare, to the lovely, light-hearted sex (I loved how it had no penetration element, which would have run counter to the easy, tentative exploration that's going on between the trio). Very hot, though :).

Seamus was great, so easy-going, delivering his statements with such aplomb while Ron and Harry get all shocked and tongue-tied.

And I loved, loved, loved Ron's dominant side, taking control of the kiss with Seamus, initiating their night together, being all-round wonderful. My inner Ron!lover purred like an ecstatic cat at those descriptions.

A truly enjoyable read.

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entrenous88
2008-01-07 03:09 pm UTC (link)

Oh, your comments are so great -- thank you, thank you, for taking the time to let me know what elements of this story you particularly enjoyed. I agree with you, that the easygoing nature of this would have been spoiled had there been a penetration element -- I definitely wanted to focus on three boys fumbling and exploring something very new.

So glad you liked Seamus's confidence, as well as Ron's take-charge attitude. I just *adore* dominant Ron, especially in this sort of situation, so it's terrific to know that you especially liked seeing that aspect of his character come out to play here.

Thanks again!

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	no_mad_skillz 2008-01-01 02:53 am UTC (link)
	I grinned all the way through this. Ah, Seamus, so matter-of-fact about it all. Lovely, light-hearted, and hot. Nice job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	entrenous88 2008-01-07 03:09 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, how lovely to hear that this story made you grin! I had much fun writing confident, matter-of-fact Seamus, so it's great that you liked reading him that way. Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ships_harry 2008-01-02 12:25 am UTC (link)
	Oh, yay! There's something incredibly appealing about these three together, even though I don't usually rate Seamus at all. But with Harry and Ron? Yeah, there's something good there :). Yummy and hot and fun and sweet and mmmmmm. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	re: Between Friends (Harry/Ron/Seamus @ merry_smutmas) entrenous88 2008-01-07 03:11 pm UTC (link)
	Hooray, I'm happy you liked seeing these three together! Yes, I definitely hear you -- put someone else with Harry and Ron, and hotness is bound to flare! Thanks so much for your response to this. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

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