On the one hand -- OMG WOW THERE IT IS MORE AND IT IS AWESOME. ♥♥♥♥♥♥
On the other -- OMG RIP MY HEART OUT & STOMP ON IT WHYDONTCHA. T____T
poor, pooooooor broken-up Cloud... and poor Zack, and poor everybody... *snugs them all*
also holy crap these are ludicrously powerful pieces of writing, because the surface-incoherence is so carefully crafted to make the overall impression come out so clear... and so ouch-y. *snugs them more*