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wanking_mods ([info]wanking_mods) wrote in [info]hp_wankfest,
@ 2008-05-06 00:01:00

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Harry Potter in the Broom Shed with Knickers/Pants
Title: Before the Magic Fades
Author: [info]sassy_cissa
Character: Harry Potter
Location: Broom shed
Object: knickers/pants
Other Characters: implied OMC
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: AU
Word Count: 588
Disclaimer: They don't belong to me, I'm just playing with them.
Author's Notes: Many thanks to my beta, to be named later, and to my darling B for staying up with me while I finished writing. Special thanks to the wonderful and talented mods in this fest.



He knew it was wrong from the moment he took the pants out of the laundry hamper in the Quidditch locker room. Yet sitting on the floor of the broom shed, it didn't seem quite so wrong. Now, in fact, it seemed rather exciting. He pulled the pants from his pocket. As he inhaled, his nostrils were filled with his aroma; dank, musky and just a hint of the aftershave that always seemed to be left behind when he walked out of a room.

Harry rubbed the pants against his crotch, loving the feeling of his prick growing hard. He slid a hand up under his jumper and teased his nipples with the soft fabric.

"Oh yes," he moaned. "Just like that."

Harry ran the edge of his thumbnail over his nipple, the sensation sending a shudder through his body. His eyes fluttered shut, closing him off from the rest of the world and allowing him to enter his fantasy.

As Harry kept the pants rubbing across his nipple, his free hand trailed down his stomach. He paused at his navel, his thumb circling it softly before plunging it inside; at the same time, he caught his nipple with the fabric, tweaking it between his thumb and forefinger. His hand moved from his navel to slide into the sparse map of hair that led into his briefs. It was soft and tickled as he ghosted his fingers over it. He could feel his erection throbbing against his trousers, straining, demanding to be released from the tight confines.

Harry cupped his prick through his clothing, rubbing, squeezing and teasing it until it was firm. In his mind, he bucked into the touch of his lover, who laughed, teasing Harry about how needy he always seemed. Harry popped his trousers open and lowered the zip, moving quickly to grasp his penis. He fisted his shaft, imagining it was his lover holding his solid length tightly in his grasp. His fingers, stroking, gliding, taunting as he ran his thumb over the fluid gathering at the tip, just hidden by his foreskin.

Quickly he pushed his trousers and briefs off, wrapping his cloth covered hand around his prick. He began to pump his hips up and down, his cock sliding easily against the soft fabric, reaching down to cup his ball sac, running his finger across his perineum.

"Please," he begged his invisible lover.

In his mind, his lover laughed and licked at the bead of fluid sliding past his foreskin and down his penis. Harry captured the moisture on his finger and lifted it to his lips, moaning in appreciation. He began to pump up and down, the fabric bunching and his movements bordering on frantic. Harry's hips bucked up each time he ran his thumb over the sensitive tip.

"So close," he murmured, "don't stop." He imagined his partner shallowly griping his prick, and he moaned at the sound of his foreskin snapping back with each downward stroke.

"Yes," Harry called out, his release pulsing across his chest and down onto the pants he still held tightly in his grip. He fell back, collapsing as his body shuddered through his orgasm.

He lay there, his breathing slowly returning to normal. Harry didn't want to open his eyes. He knew that when he did he'd be back in the broom shed, alone, with nothing but a pair of sticky pants and his fantasies about the man he could never have. "Cedric," he whispered, his eyes fluttering open — the magic was gone.


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[info]eeyore9990
2008-05-05 11:07 pm UTC (link)
Ohhhh my god. Yum. Very very yum. And so bittersweet! I love it!

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[info]alwaysasnapefan
2008-05-05 11:10 pm UTC (link)
Awwwwwwww. How heartbreakingly beautiful.

his thumb circling it softly before plunging it inside
Navel fucking, navel fucking, it's awwwwwwwright!!!

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[info]fbowden
2008-05-05 11:13 pm UTC (link)
Awwwww!!! Wow! *fans self* that was hawt!! And Cedric.. omg, poor harry! This was beautifully poignant as well as sexy and gave me a fantastic visual!

xxx

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[info]oldenuf2nb
2008-05-05 11:14 pm UTC (link)
Ohhh.

This is lovely, and kinda sad. Lovely wank, but that bittersweet realization at the end is what really got to me. I love this!

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[info]gryffindorj
2008-05-05 11:20 pm UTC (link)
Very hot. I like Harry talking to himself and closing his eyes in his fantasy. A little sad at the end. Poor Harry. Maybe there's hopes of a get together in the prefect's bathroom.

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[info]unbroken_halo
2008-05-05 11:22 pm UTC (link)
Oooh! Well done, mystery author! Heartbreakingly hot! Poor Harry!

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[info]alisanne
2008-05-05 11:22 pm UTC (link)
*thud*
So HOT! The wanking was delicious and the end was so bittersweet. *cries for poor Harry*
Wonderful job with this.

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[info]r_grayjoy
2008-05-05 11:29 pm UTC (link)
What a perfect fic for this fest; short, hot, and to the point! ::grin:: I love the way you describe the "mystery" Quidditch player's scent, and how very sensual this entire piece is. And the fact that it was Cedric at the end is just the perfect, bittersweet twist. Really nice.

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[info]joanwilder
2008-05-05 11:56 pm UTC (link)
That was great--hot up to the very end, when the 'name' of his lover brought it to an end. Great job!

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[info]rickey_a
2008-05-06 12:00 am UTC (link)
mmm
a nice little quickie before bed
thanks ;)

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[info]lilyseyes
2008-05-06 12:09 am UTC (link)
Oh, very very good! Sad, but so very erotic!

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[info]lilithilien
2008-05-06 02:08 am UTC (link)
Lovely hot wanking here, Mystery Author. And then just when I was feeling cheap and dirty, you have to go and throw in the bittersweet ending to make me tear up. I'm feeling wonderfully manipulated now and I love it. Great story!

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[info]nehalenia
2008-05-06 02:32 am UTC (link)
Excellent descriptions in this, very sensual. It's like a steamy hot-toddy before bedtime, with a shot of angst at the finish. Niiice!

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[info]eriador117
2008-05-06 03:16 am UTC (link)
Aw, poor Harry! That was so bittersweet, but lovely!

take care,
Annette

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[info]torino10154
2008-05-06 05:00 am UTC (link)
Gorgeous-so hot. But sad too. *snuggles Harry* Great job.

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[info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-05-06 08:51 am UTC (link)
Oh, very delicious and so bittersweet. Very nice!

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[info]ladydeth12
2008-05-06 09:02 am UTC (link)
Oh wow.. that was hot. And so sad. Poor Harry :(

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[info]bonfoi
2008-05-06 09:28 am UTC (link)
That hurts so much, even as its heat burns. Short and so very bittersweet.

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[info]snegurochka_lee
2008-05-06 09:32 am UTC (link)
Ooh! I wasn't expecting that last line! Lovely, angsty twist. And the wanking was delicious. :)

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[info]ragdoll
2008-05-06 09:57 am UTC (link)
Oooh, lovely! Very hot, very short n sweet (in the best of all possible ways) and a great twist at the end. Great job, mystery author!

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[info]kabal42
2008-05-06 12:06 pm UTC (link)
Glorious wank. Hot and delicious and well done! The bitter-sweet ending really got me, too. I love that you did that.

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[info]harrysexxxmagic
2008-05-06 03:15 pm UTC (link)
OMFG! I'm crying here! That was beautiful and HOTT. The navel thumb fucking I might have to use that *winks* Total bittersweet hottness.

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[info]ships_harry
2008-05-06 03:19 pm UTC (link)
Aw, poor Harry. This was sweet and kinda sad. I couldn't figure out the AU part though.

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[info]plotbunniofdoom
2008-05-06 08:37 pm UTC (link)
Oh, hot and bittersweet.

Lovely.

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[info]hd_obsession
2008-05-07 06:59 pm UTC (link)
Awww, and I was hoping for a happy ending. Def. didn't expect that, but it was nicely (read:HOT) written, leading up to that ending.

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[info]tlp2107
2008-05-07 11:45 pm UTC (link)
wonderfully hot, and a touch sad at the end. great job!

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[info]melmoe1
2008-05-09 04:21 pm UTC (link)
Oh, poor Harry. Wonderful job.

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[info]celandineb
2008-05-11 10:06 pm UTC (link)
Awww. *sniffles* I like that it's ambiguous as to whether Cedric's even still alive, here.

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[info]mindabbles
2008-05-12 01:36 am UTC (link)
Very nice! Loved the emotional details of the fantasy. Ohh, ouch at the end!

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[info]ceria
2008-05-13 06:32 pm UTC (link)
Very hot, I like that it was Cedric and not revealed until the end. The descriptions in here are very sexy.

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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-05-14 09:56 pm UTC (link)
Very effective!

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[info]hogwartshoney
2008-05-25 03:16 pm UTC (link)
Harry and Cedders! One of my favourite pairings right there.
Found this via snegurochka_lee's rec.

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[info]romaine24
2008-06-08 01:31 am UTC (link)
God, Harry's fantasy is just so heartbreaking. One that we know won't come true. The taking of the pants from the laundry is so wonderfully juvenile and the wanking was both so sensual and desperate. Lovely short fic.

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