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wanking_mods ([info]wanking_mods) wrote in [info]hp_wankfest,
@ 2008-05-06 12:00:00

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Severus Snape in the Prefect's Bath with an Invisibility Cloak
Title: Silken Fantasy
Author: [info]lilyseyes
Character: Severus Snape
Location: Prefects Bath
Object: Invisibility Cloak
Other Characters: Harry Potter
Rating: R
Warnings: Fantasies, mentions of under-aged shenanigans, implied voyeurism
Word Count: +/- 1200
Disclaimer: JKR owns the Potterverse, I just play in it. No money is made from this work of amateur fiction.
Author's Notes: Just a little ficlet – my thanks to my two amazing betas, you rock!






Severus Snape stalked the corridors of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, his boot heels clicking loudly on the flagstone floors. He’d already managed to ferret out a pair of snogging Hufflepuffs, a Ravenclaw fourth year sneaking back from the library, and a rather interesting Slytherin threesome. The two seventh year girls seem more taken with each other than the sixth year boy they’d brought along to service them. Severus had long ago concluded the hormones levels of the older students in the spring could power the entire school with the magical energy they produced.

The corridors were deserted as Severus made his way up to the fifth floor, the staircases for once cooperating with him. Pausing at the statue of Boris the Bewildered, Severus listened carefully, all his senses honed by years of spying were alert for the slightest noise. It was long past curfew now and he should not have to worry about students out of their dorms, but Merlin knew there were some with more than enough arrogance to wander.

Cautiously, Severus moved down the corridor and with a hastily whispered password, slipped into the Prefects Bath and bolted the door behind him. He added a strong silencing charm and a locking spell that even a nosy headmaster would have to work at breaking.

Hexing the simpering mermaid to silence, Severus sighed. It had been a very long day in a week of long days and an even longer term. Sometimes he just wished it was all over and done with. He was sure he wouldn’t live past the Dark Lord’s demise this time, but he would at least be at rest. Passing his hand over the many buttons on his robe, Severus carefully hung it from a conjured hook. His fingers worked on the cuffs of his pristine white shirt as he knelt to turn on the specific taps he wanted for his bath. His shirt soon joined his robe, while his trousers and pants were folded and placed on a bench. From an inner pocket of his robe, Severus removed a long silvery length of fabric.

Sitting on the edge of the large bath, Severus slipped his toes into the rising water as he brought the fabric up to trail it over his hardening penis. His only relief from the many pressures on him was when he engaged in these dirty interludes. It would never do to have anyone discover that Severus Snape wanked to the fantasy of pounding into one of his students, even if the boy was of age. No, Albus would not like the images Severus entertained of fucking his precious Golden Boy over the desk in the Defense classroom, even if the manipulative bastard was one of the few who would understand the allure of the beautiful young man. Severus’ cock twitched at the images he was picturing in his mind.

Severus draped the raw silk cloth over his prick and groaned. The feel of the cloth was the closest he’d been able to come to in an effort to duplicate the Invisibility Cloak he knew the brat used to thwart him at curfew. It was the same cloak he’d used to do Albus’ bidding in those dangerous days before the Dark Lord’s first fall. The raw silk had the shimmery feeling of the cloak but it lacked the tingle of magic that made the cloak feel like a fall of water caressing his cock. Now, the cloak had the further allure of Harry Potter beneath it to excite him even more. Nothing excited Severus more than the thought of the teenager, huddled under his Invisibility Cloak watching him wank.

Looping the silk around his cock, Severus slid it up and down. The whispering caress made him groan with pleasure and spread his legs wide as Severus allowed the end of the cloth to drape down over his balls. One hand gripped the silk tighter as the fingers of the other slid up his chest to flick first one nipple, then the other. Pinching the hardening nubs in turn, Severus moaned, the images playing out in his mind as delicious as the feeling of the silk against his heated flesh. The whisper of cloth tickled his scrotum and Severus shifted, leaning back as he spread his cheeks so the end of the cloth tickled his entrance like the tip of an insolent tongue.

Something drew Severus’ attention to the nearest corner of the room, the merest breath of noise, and he thought he saw a shimmer against the stone wall. Blinking, Severus stared at the spot, willing it to happen again. The thought it might be Harry Potter, crouched under the shimmery material of his Invisibility Cloak, wanking as he watched Severus inflamed him. The teenager’s sweet cock would be long and slender, coltish like the boy himself. His chest would be smooth with brown nipples, and a flat belly nicely divided by a dark treasure trail.

Severus imagined burying his nose behind the brat’s well-proportioned balls, the sweet aroma of tender, virgin flesh would be intoxicating. His hand squeezed the tip of his cock as Severus pictured the delectable treat. Fingers tweaking his nipples, Severus stroked his prick hard, with a downward motion that had the silk brushing his hole followed by the upward twist that he liked. His balls tightened and Severus gasped as he imagined Harry riding his own fingers to climax as he watched his professor wank.

Arching his back, Severus came hard as he bunched the raw silk around the base of his cock. A deep groan reverberated around the chamber. Severus was hard pressed to say whether it was his, and would adamantly deny having called out any particular name. His own breath was loud in his ears and he carefully set the silken cloth aside, casting a silent cleaning charm on it.

Severus moved forward to slip into the hot, fragrant water. The woodsy scent calmed his thundering heart and soothed his harsh breathing. Ah, if only his fantasy were true… Severus knew he could tutor the young man in the pleasures of the flesh. Indeed, what better use could there be for that insolent tongue than to be wrapped around Severus’ cock. His eyes darted toward the corner of the room, now sure he’d seen another shimmer against the stone wall. A slow smile curved his thin lips as his cock gave an approving twitch. Perhaps this fantasy was attainable after all.

The smirk firmly in place Severus leisurely completed his bath, stepping gracefully from the pool before Summoning a towel. He pointedly ignored the smothered groan as he bent over to dry his calves. Dressing quickly, Severus banished the water from the bath before he strode to the door. Dismantling the spells, Severus reached to grasp the door handle.

“Five points from Gryffindor for being out after curfew, Mr. Potter. Also you will serve detention after dinner tomorrow night in my office.” Severus smiled wickedly. “And bring the cloak.”




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[info]r_grayjoy
2008-05-06 11:09 am UTC (link)
Severus had long ago concluded the hormones levels of the older students in the spring could power the entire school with the magical energy they produced.

That line just cracks me up. Your opening is fabulous and totally had me hooked. ;) And he hexed the mermaid -- hahaha!

The references to Dumbledore -- and his sexual preferences -- are a nice touch here, too. Lots of fabulous little details in this. The wanking, of course, is most tasty, and the twist ending is great. Love that last line! Really well done. :D

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:19 pm UTC

[info]eeyore9990
2008-05-06 11:21 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is deliciously wicked in the most exquisite way. I love it! *sooo wants to see the detention*

Hee! Absolutely fantastic! Thanks so much for sharing it, mystery author!

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:19 pm UTC

[info]centaury_squill
2008-05-06 11:21 am UTC (link)
Gorgeous!
I'd love to see a companion piece from Harry's POV ;D

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:20 pm UTC

[info]torino10154
2008-05-06 11:33 am UTC (link)
Nnggh! Oh god. I love this. The silk 'invisibility' cloak is very clever. Not surprised at all that he found an audience. *vbg* Great job.

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:21 pm UTC

[info]alwaysasnapefan
2008-05-06 11:35 am UTC (link)
Cocks + silk = IRL OTP!

Loved the silky wank.

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:21 pm UTC

[info]ladybahiya
2008-05-06 11:59 am UTC (link)
Something drew Severus’ attention to the nearest corner of the room, the merest breath of noise, and he thought he saw a shimmer against the stone wall. Blinking, Severus stared at the spot, willing it to happen again. The thought it might be Harry Potter, crouched under the shimmery material of his Invisibility Cloak, wanking as he watched Severus inflamed him. The teenager’s sweet cock would be long and slender, coltish like the boy himself. His chest would be smooth with brown nipples, and a flat belly nicely divided by a dark treasure trail.

Something was telling me that Harry had to be in the room. I love it when I'm right. I can now picture Harry hurrying back to his room and imagining what his detention will consist of. Very hot fic!

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:22 pm UTC

[info]kabal42
2008-05-06 12:10 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that was great! I loved Snapes voice in this - and it takes a good deal to make me appreciate him. (Snarry also squicks me, and I still thought you did a great job!) I kind of want to wash my brain with soap, but I still don't regret reading! *G* Good job - I always like it when someone makes me appreciate something I won't normally read.

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:24 pm UTC

[info]snakeysnape
2008-05-06 12:10 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm...delicious! :begs: More please?

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:24 pm UTC

[info]spidermoth
2008-05-06 12:12 pm UTC (link)
Oh my! Wanking and voyeurism! There's a OTP!

Gods, I just loved Snape's utter aplomb when he's sure Harry is watching. It just goes to prove... confidence is sexy!

Ummm....Lovely...

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:25 pm UTC

[info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-05-06 01:13 pm UTC (link)
So hot and wicked. Just wonderful!

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:26 pm UTC

[info]alisanne
2008-05-06 02:00 pm UTC (link)
Hehehehe. I suspect that Harry can retrieve those points if he plays his cards right during detention. ;)
Nicely hot!

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:26 pm UTC

[info]half_the_girl
2008-05-06 02:30 pm UTC (link)
Sexy as hell! I wrote a short piece a while ago in the same vein (HP catches SS wanking), though from Harry's perspective and with a really uncomfortable ending. Yours is so much better... *is jealous* Damn, you create a lovely visual with the silk, I'm going to be thinking of that all day.

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:28 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]half_the_girl, 2008-06-15 03:24 pm UTC

[info]ships_harry
2008-05-06 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Nice. I'd thought at first that the invisibility cloak was going to be sheer fantasy, but the voyeurism? l;kjasdf :)

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:29 pm UTC

[info]who_la_hoop
2008-05-06 03:58 pm UTC (link)
Ooooh, yum. There should definitely be a sequel! :D

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:31 pm UTC

[info]nehalenia
2008-05-06 04:38 pm UTC (link)
Beautifully written, especially the descriptions, and the twist at the end with the voyeurism was such a kick! Great work!

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:32 pm UTC

[info]majmunka
2008-05-06 05:05 pm UTC (link)
Yummm, not only a delicious wank but a promise for more. Very nice :)

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:32 pm UTC

[info]fbowden
2008-05-06 05:27 pm UTC (link)
Nnngh.. this was soooo hot! OMG, Harry watching Snape wank...*dies*

I really want to see the detention *grins*

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:33 pm UTC

[info]plotbunniofdoom
2008-05-06 08:42 pm UTC (link)
This is so hot! I love that Harry really was watching him.

Always had a soft spot for the Prefects bathroom, and you make great use of it. xD

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:35 pm UTC

[info]odogoddess
2008-05-06 08:57 pm UTC (link)
"And bring the cloak." Hee!

What a yummy wanking session. I hope Harry serves detention *properly*... or improperly. ;) Good job!

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:36 pm UTC

[info]bonfoi
2008-05-06 09:14 pm UTC (link)
A deep groan reverberated around the chamber. Severus was hard pressed to say whether it was his, and would adamantly deny having called out any particular name.

I swear I heard that groan, the faint tremor of the echo reverberating across space. Magnificently thoughtful, with just a soupçon of snark to spice it up at the end.

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:37 pm UTC

[info]bonfoi
2008-05-06 10:24 pm UTC (link)
I know I wrote a truly classy, tasteful comment--before the database became unavailable!

The word soupçon was used in reference to Severus' snark...brilliant may have been on the tip of my fingers to type as well.

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:38 pm UTC

[info]aylix_green
2008-05-07 12:32 am UTC (link)
what better use could there be for that insolent tongue

what use, indeed.

*whimpers* sequel? please?

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:39 pm UTC

[info]eriador117
2008-05-07 03:18 am UTC (link)
Delicious! I want to see that detention too, LOL!

take care,
Annette

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:42 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]eriador117, 2008-06-16 05:22 am UTC

[info]harrysexxxmagic
2008-05-07 07:37 am UTC (link)
Snarry I loved this. Snape/Harry is slowly becoming one of the ships I sail on. And fics like this only reinforce it. It was very HOTTT and snarky.

I loved the ending. Maybe Harry can do SOMETHING to get those points back and maybe some points added. *winks* I'd like to see that a continuation Snarry fic, with alot more than just wanking.
*winks*

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:44 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]harrysexxxmagic, 2008-06-22 06:30 pm UTC

[info]tlp2107
2008-05-07 07:57 am UTC (link)
oh this was so naughty and hot! great way to incorporate the invisibility cloak. and the ending was fantastic!

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(no subject) - [info]lilyseyes, 2008-06-15 02:44 pm UTC

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