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beholder_mod (beholder_mod) wrote in hp_beholder,
@ 2011-05-04 14:05:00

Entry tags:

aberforth dumbledore, beholder_2011, fic, hagrid/aberforth, het, rating:nc17, rolanda hooch, rubeus hagrid, severus snape, slash, snape/hooch

FIC: "Rebuilding" for synn
Recipient: synn
Author: psyfic
Title: Rebuilding
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Hagrid/Aberforth, Snape/Hooch (Hagerforth & Snooch? Doesn't that sound like a Wizarding Law Firm?)
Word Count: ~10,300
Warnings/Content Information (Highlight to View): *Size queens, rather a lot of spunk, frottage, wall sex, first time. There is no bestiality but it is alluded to in re: the expected canon character.*
Summary: Two couples are brought together during the time of Hogwarts' rebuilding...
Author's Notes: You wrote: 'I like the idea of Snape/anybody, and Harry/Hagrid is a favorite.' Well, Hagrid already had a partner for the story, but I decided to include his and Harry's friendship here. I took your Snape/anybody at face value and hope you enjoy that pairing. You also wrote: 'I like details about little everyday magic more than large rituals, I love Hogwarts itself as a location: the history imbued in it, the thought of rebuilding after the war, etc.' So I used a bit of all that and I hope it suits. Happy Beholding!

"Rebuilding"

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	gingertart50 2011-05-04 07:50 pm UTC (link)
	This is lovely! Yay for Snape getting laid at last, and Hargid for realising what he really needs. I loved this fic - lucky synn! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	psyfic 2011-06-06 07:14 am UTC (link)
	Thank you. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	schemingreader 2011-05-05 02:12 am UTC (link)
	This was delightful! I love this Hooch/Snape--she loves him for his vulnerability, and we do too. I also appreciate that you had Harry go back to find Snape. Very satisfying, as was your good pacing and good story structure. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	psyfic 2011-06-06 07:18 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! I'm glad you found it enjoyable. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	alwaysasnapefan 2011-05-05 06:56 am UTC (link)
	AWW. I liked both pairings so much here. I loved Hagrid realizing he's got everything he really needs and how Snape and Hooch are old friends and how Snape is all limping and myopic and salt-and-pepper and :-3 Very cute, and fun. I really liked the little details with Mr. Lovegood's food and the way Harry and Hagrid's conversation was so natural. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	psyfic 2011-06-06 07:19 am UTC (link)
	Glad you enjoyed it and liked my post-Nagini!Snape. Thank you. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	kinky_kneazle 2011-05-05 01:44 pm UTC (link)
	This was lovely! It had a sort of old-fashioned quality that suited the couples. Hooch was wonderfully strong and confident in her body and her sexuality and I loved the way she reassured Snape and taught him at the same time. And Aberforth was far more sentimental than I was expecting. I really enjoyed this. Thank you, Mystery Author! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	psyfic 2011-06-06 07:21 am UTC (link)
	Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked the Snape/Hooch interaction and that you enjoyed it. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	bylby 2011-05-06 06:18 pm UTC (link)
	Loved this story! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	psyfic 2011-06-06 07:21 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	atdelphi 2011-05-06 09:38 pm UTC (link)
	Aw, this was absolutely delightful! I did a little dance in my chair to see Aberforth's name come up, and I just love your Hooch. Nicely done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	psyfic 2011-06-06 07:24 am UTC (link)
	Thank you. :) Re: Aberforth, when I saw the request, I just knew he would pair up nicely with Hagrid, so there you are. I'm glad you liked it. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	leela_cat 2011-05-06 09:52 pm UTC (link)
	The relationships in this story were very well-drawn and the pairings well-matched. I loved the friendship between Harry and Hagrid, the long-term and yet still not open relationship between Hagrid and Aberforth, and so very much love for the new (and yet continuing) relationship between Hooch and Snape. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	psyfic 2011-06-06 07:51 am UTC (link)
	Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the various ships. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	kelly_chambliss 2011-05-08 03:02 am UTC (link)
	I love a witch like "Zero," who knows what she wants -- and gets it. Snape is appealingly vulnerable, and as for Hagrid/Aberforth, well, that's a match made in heaven. A fun read. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	psyfic 2011-06-06 07:52 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

synn
2011-05-10 03:24 am UTC (link)

Oh mystery author, this is just wonderful - thank you so much!
I love harry and hagrid's friendship - the way hagrid isn't willing to confide everything, and harry is rather oblivious to it, feels very ic to me.
Abe/Hagrid is lovely - I <3 letter writing in fic, so Hagrid's 'advertisement' really being a little love note/secret message is just excellent, and it fits them so well, being non-sentimental in style/statement, but with an implied sentimentality in how long it goes on. Also, on a kinky note, facials = yay, and I hardly ever see them in fic, so thank you : ) Hagrid's realization at the end was just such a nice, happy note to end on too!

Snape/hooch - what a surprise! I happen to really like hooch in general, so you certainly won't hear any complaints from me on that front : ) I loved the details about the affect being left for dead in the shack had on severus, as well as the extended sex drive (poor severus!), and z's enthusiasm/ lust (for life. and other things) bringing him out and helping him to heal. I enjoyed how irrepressible Hooch was; cheerful and a little chaotic, which is how I picture her.
I lol'd at harry having to deal with mr. lovegood's cooking. poor harry. and the mooncalves sound adorable!

This was such a treat - like I got two custom-made stories all at once! Thank you!! : )

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	psyfic 2011-06-06 08:41 am UTC (link)
	You're very welcome. :) I'm glad you liked the friendship, as well as the pairings, and that it seemed ic. I'm pleased that there were a couple of elements you especially enjoyed and that you liked the little details. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	eeyore9990 2011-05-23 03:29 pm UTC (link)
	Aww, this was so cute! Loved it. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	psyfic 2011-06-06 08:46 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)