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Dexy ([info]dead_sexydexy) wrote in [info]dexy_demented,
@ 2008-04-22 15:47:00

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Entry tags:limerick, mwpp era, pg-13, poetry, severus, sirius

The Prank: Limerick; Sirius, Severus PG-13
Title: The Prank
Prompt:[info]phoenix_flies drabble_a_thon: # 27 The point of no return
Author: [info]dead_sexydexy in [info]dexy_demented
Rating: PG-13
Form: Limerick
Characters: Snape, Sirius, Moony
Notes: Title pretty much says it all.
Disclaimer: The Potterverse is not mine, I make no money from it, I don’t intend to harm it or anyone else.
Comments and Concrit: Are always welcome.


The Prank

To know Moony's mystery, Snivellus did yearn.
The dangers he did not discern
When Sirius Black
Sent him to the Shack--
And he neared the point of no return.



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[info]esmestrella
2008-05-01 03:34 am UTC (link)
Hmm, needs work. The first line is too long. 2-4 are good. Argh... Moony, Lupin and Remus all have stress on the first syllable...

Of "Moony" that Snivellus would learn,
But the dangers he did not discern
When Sirius Black
Sent him to the Shack
So he quite nearly did not return

? I'm having a hard time with this one...

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