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Dexy ([info]dead_sexydexy) wrote in [info]dexy_demented,
@ 2008-04-22 15:36:00

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Entry tags:limerick, mwpp era, pg-13, poetry, severus, sirius

Let's Remember: Limerick; Snape/Black; PG-13
Title: Let's Remember
Prompt:[info]phoenix_flies drabble_a_thon: # 23 Obliviate
Author: [info]dead_sexydexy in [info]dexy_demented
Rating: PG-13
Form: Limerick
Characters: Sirius/Severus
Notes: MWPP Era. They've just shared a mutually satisfying, yet utterly surprising kiss. Candy to anyone who writes a ficlet or poem about how they wound up in this situation.
Disclaimer: The Potterverse is not mine, I make no money from it, I don’t intend to harm it or anyone else.
Comments and Concrit: Are always welcome.


Let's Remember

No Sev, don't use Obliviate.
I like seeing us both in this state.
I want to remember
This day in December
We shared something more than sheer hate.

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[info]lore
2008-04-30 09:07 pm UTC (link)
Awww, yay!!! <3 <3 <3

love, lore

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[info]dead_sexydexy
2008-04-30 09:48 pm UTC (link)
Glad you approve! I knew all that hate was really something else.

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[info]elethian
2008-04-30 10:59 pm UTC (link)
Ooh! Severus/Sirius kisses! My favourite. Especially this sort of thing, where it hints at Sirius actually having tender feelings for Severus. Way to go on squeezing that into five lines of a limerick. :)

Obliviate's kind of a tricky word here, but it clearly needs to be there.
3-5 are good although I have some suggestions for alternate last lines too...

No, Severus, never Obliviate.
I'd like us to stay in this state.
I want to remember
This day in December
We shared something more than sheer hate.
(We shared something more than pure hate)
(We shared something other than hate)

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