Wow. I really enjoyed this! I liked the broom cupboard setting for each vignette, and the lovely angst between each couple. I also liked your James and Lily very much - not the usual caricatures we so often see of them. Lily was nicely in control of exactly what she wanted, not just being bossed around by James, and James was nicely nervous. :) I also loved Sirius's anguish, and the Snape/Remus bit was lovely. :)