Oh my! I swear I've never seen your work before. The contrast between the simplicity of outline of their bodies, and the detail at the point where they join, the emphasis on their hair (Snape's is as pretty as Lily's, yay!), and the expressiveness of their mouths, and Lily's foot and hand... all lovely. The notion of their using James's cloak, and wherever they are, we're the only ones who can see them - yummy.