Oh, dear lord, I think you have killed me with the awesome. The way you set the scene at the faire, and the characterizations, and asldj;lfsdjf; the sex scene was incredibly hot (duhh XD) but I'm mostly drooling over the plot and the competition and the implications for the future and and and and
I'm flailing like a headless chicken again, but not from stress this time. This is just... wow, and I can't believe it's you (this is hecticity from Lumos, and I remember you TALKING about writing this, and I never DREAMED it'd be mine) and OHMIGOD I'm hyperventilating!!!
*flappy hands of glee*
Thank you so, so much for this, you have made my entire year. It's fucking brilliant (as I would have expected from you :D) and it's all for me and I just.
I have no other words. I'm embarrassing myself with my incoherent flailing and squeeing but I don't CARE and it definitely deserves a more coherent review but you have RENDERED ME SPEECHLESS.