| Not related to DA, but related to writing! |
[09 Jan 2010|06:33pm] |
Hello there everyone!
I have a small and somewhat different request. My boyfriend has recently finished his first novel after about 7 months of writing. So far, I am his only editor, and he is looking for readers. He's not interested in heavy edits; what he wants to know is - is the story interesting? Is it readable? Are you entertained? Does the setting make sense?
He's given me the prologue (thought it's a hefty prologue) to post here in hopes that anyone who might be interested can read and comment on the above questions :) The setting is post-apocalyptic, in a universe of his own creation (although he got inspiration from Fallout).
Anyway! If anyone is possibly interested, I post the prologue in two pieces below, since it's too big to fit into one. Fake cuts are fake, and lead to my personal journal.
Text: Signals and Noise Prologue 1
Text: Signals and Noise Prologue 2
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