Ah. Ah hah. Tony was trying to be a Very Good Man(tm). Tasha got it now, her eyes shifting between the two. She tapped her finger on one, "I like this, but I think it needs a few modifications."
She leaned forward a bit towards the both of them as she talked, "It feels too impersonal. We need to make it..personal. With feeling, from the heart." She closed the script with a snap, "It is too stilted."