Imenry smiled. How rare it was really, to hear a warrior request criticism. Usually they bristled at the mere idea, at the assumption that you might be able to offer suggestions. It was as if doing so immediately signaled to them that you were better than they were. Which was not necessarily the case, just that you had a different experience or perspective.
She looked thoughtful a moment, trying to decide how to phrase it, then spoke. "Well I have noticed that you don't really give yourself a lot of room for sudden attacks. A Darkspawn, for example, as Ser Ordhan said, will be very erratic in it's attacks. You won't be able to find a pattern or style like you can in a human warrior whose had training and often falls into a pattern of similar strikes." She paused then, looking at him. "Do you understand what I mean? I guess the best suggestion I could give would be to read body language a little bit more. Often you can see where the strike might be coming from just ahead of when it hits... and then if your reaction time is fast enough, intercept, block, or counter."