Re: Hank McCoy
There are just a few things we need cleared up before we can accept Hank. The big one is the reference to 'mutants' throughout the application, as this is a world where mutation is valued and the word 'mutant' is a slur. Also the implication that in Hank's community his status as a powered human was problematic rather than a point of pride: was this because the community was backward and bigoted, or because of jealousy of his mutation? If the former, why didn't Hank's parents try to get him out of this situation sooner?
Also, given that Hank's powers are focused on super-human strength, agility, etc, playing a position such as quarterback on the football team would have been problematic. His powers would have given him an unfair advantage that would have been almost impossible to compensate for. It's more likely he would have been steered to a position such as linebacker, where the other teams would have had 'tanks' to line up against him. And finally, it seems like Hank's involved in rather more clubs than it would be at all possible to keep up with, unless the list is intended to reflect activities he's engaged in in the past as well as those he's currently involved in. Four to five is probably the maximum number that's manageable with a full college course load.