You read it perfectly! Sorry for the delay, CRAZINESS.
Seeing the delight on the vampire's face only spread sugar onto hers. Hana brought the fork back down on the pastry, slicing herself a bite. Her lips wrapped carefully around the powdered sugar, pastry flake and creme--all of which exploded in a practically sinful mix of pleasure on her tongue. Hana's eyes closed momentarily, a barely-existent sound hummed from the back of her throat: one of want and granted satisfaction.
She opened her eyes again, still delicately chewing as she placed the fork down and started to write.