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snarryswapmod (snarryswapmod) wrote in snarry_swap,
@ 2010-01-15 00:01:00

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creation: fic, rated: nc-17, the_con_cept

Happy Daft Day, aceia!
Recipient: aceia
Title: The Merry-Go-Round
Author: the_con_cept
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~10,600
Warnings/Kinks: Chan (Harry is 15), *cock-slapping, first-time, public sex, crossdressing, forced prostitution or pimping, paddling, orgasm denial, rough sex, possibly a LITTLE dubcon-ish at times. Very, very brief mentions of the existence of bloodplay and watersports, but not as something Snape or Harry experiences. I guess this would be AU as well, since Harry Potter was probably not so precocious as this even off-screen.*
Summary: Harry goes looking for a good time, but finds Professor Snape instead. Snape sets out to make sure Harry has anything but a good time, but he hasn’t counted on Harry’s contrary nature. Instead of reining in Harry’s wild desires, Snape gets taken along for the ride.
A/N: Much thanks to angela_snape for all the wonderful polish you gave this, and eeyore9990 for all the inspiration and proofing, and angela_snape for the hand-holding and brainstorming. All further mistakes are my own.
Disclaimer: Belongs to J.K. Rowling, etc.

The Merry-Go-Round

If you want to rec this fic, please link this post, not the off-site URL! Thank you!

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	synn 2010-01-15 03:13 am UTC (link)
	gurgles that was delicious. favorite kinks aside, I love your harry here, especially when Snape is sharing him. oh, and Snape getting infuriated when harry smiles at someone else -- fabulous. (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:06 pm UTC

	snarry_fan7 2010-01-15 03:47 am UTC (link)
	brain has melted away Holy fuck that was hot. I love how you wrote Harry and Snape (both together and individually). I really like how possessive Snape got when Harry smiled at anyone else. An excellent ending too. Very well done indeed.~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:07 pm UTC

slashpine
2010-01-15 03:58 am UTC (link)

Oh, my goodness. That was so dirty and sweet all at the same time. *melts happily*

I love your exasperated Snape! It just keeps getting funnier and funnier. I started laughing out loud when literally throws up his hands in the air (I'd love to see this illustrated!) and sits down on the bed, shoulders slumping. And then this:

Harry seemed to notice and delight in his titillation. He squirmed closer, kissing Snape’s ear. “You should spank me again, harder, Daddy,” he whispered. “I’m awfully bad and I need discipline.”

“Arrrgh,” Snape replied.

Now that, a Snape deprived of words, is the ultimate!

They really are on different wavelengths and you took it to an extreme, keeping them so incompatibly *compatible* all the way through.

This was why Snape had such difficulty with the concepts of good and evil. Voldemort had never dreamt up anything this insidious, while Potter consistently found ways to put Snape through new and beguiling versions of hell.

It certainly was delicious! Small wonder they were both back the next night... But unlike them, you never flagged for a second! The outrageous funniness and hot smex continued all the way through. WHEW!!! *collapses into warm puddle*

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the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:11 pm UTC

	bk7brokemybrain 2010-01-15 06:33 am UTC (link)
	Terrifically sexy, hot and tender, and that's just Harry's bottom. I loved that Merry-Go-Round and Harry getting so painfully turned on. He was so innocent and enthusiastic that is was wonderful to read, and try to put myself in his place. Likewise with Snape. What a heady situation. Great read! (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:14 pm UTC

bk7brokemybrain, 2010-01-15 09:53 pm UTC

	eeyore9990 2010-01-15 06:42 am UTC (link)
	OMG YAY IT'S POSTED! rereads all the deliciousness (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:14 pm UTC

vividzephyr
2010-01-15 09:15 am UTC (link)

Wow! That was absolutely amazing! I loved how Harry always thwarted Snape's plans to make him not want to go to the sex club only to focus all his desire on Snape himself. It was almost dom/sub in how Harry reacted to Snape's decisions. And I loved how Snape kept getting all wound up over Harry. It was easy to tell he wanted Harry badly, but he wouldn't let himself have Harry until he had made himself jealous enough to overrule his own sense of honor. Brilliant! And so funny, too! It really made me grin. :D

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the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:26 pm UTC

	eriador117 2010-01-15 10:13 am UTC (link)
	Fans self Is it getting hot in here? ;) So naughty and delicious and when Harry called him Daddy I just about melted into the chair! Lovely! (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:27 pm UTC

	necromanticnoir 2010-01-15 10:38 am UTC (link)
	Gah that was amazing!! Ooh, Snape was so jealous! And now only he can satisfy lovely Harry - who was so cute and sexy! Wonderful work, so damn hot :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:29 pm UTC

	fancypantsdylan 2010-01-15 12:42 pm UTC (link)
	Oh bloody effing hell, that was just so hot. I actually felt sorry for Severus at the end when nothing he was trying to show Harry worked and then the little so and so had to say "I learnt that no man could every satisfy me as much as Severus Snape." which is so true and Severus was done for. Absolutely brilliant! (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:30 pm UTC

	accio_kilt 2010-01-15 03:03 pm UTC (link)
	Hahahahahahha!!!! Poor Sev... everything he tried backfired. But I think it all worked out for both of them in the end... actually I think Harry planned the whole thing from the beginning with the twins' help! (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:33 pm UTC

	asnowyowl 2010-01-15 04:17 pm UTC (link)
	Oh! OH! That was incredibly hot. You hit sooo many kinks soo deliciously. The Merry Go Round - what a concept. flails I'll be thinking about this one for some time to come. (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 04:34 pm UTC

	torino10154 2010-01-15 05:56 pm UTC (link)
	Hot damn! smokes a cigarette Love Harry-eager and impish! Severus increasingly exasperated and turned on. giggles I definitely agree Severus needs to keep a VERY close eye on Harry from now on. nods Hot and filthy (just how we like it from you!). Great job. (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 08:08 pm UTC

	darkwish3 2010-01-15 07:41 pm UTC (link)
	wowsers! you know i don't think you CAN write bad fic :D once again YUMYUMYUM! (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 10:25 pm UTC

	aries3 2010-01-15 09:48 pm UTC (link)
	hot dirty fun. yum! (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 10:25 pm UTC

	auntmuriel 2010-01-15 10:02 pm UTC (link)
	I really enjoyed this story, it was so much fun. Increasingly frustrated Snape is hilarious and Harry just kept on provoking him, shameless. At least he got his point across in the end. (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-15 11:16 pm UTC

	alisanne 2010-01-16 05:37 am UTC (link)
	Bwahahahahaaha! Hilarious and so very dirty/hot/wrong. Harry took Severus for a bit of a ride, didn't he? g Delicious! :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-16 05:47 pm UTC

	littleroo27 2010-01-16 05:40 am UTC (link)
	holy bleeding hell, woman! you've blown all of my synapses to bits! (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-16 05:48 pm UTC

	lillibet4 2010-01-16 10:50 am UTC (link)
	Oh God that was hot. And strangely hilarious. Severus's internal monologue was brilliant. Your Harry makes the perfect slutty boy too. (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-16 06:19 pm UTC

	centaury_squill 2010-01-16 11:32 am UTC (link)
	So hot the snow's starting to melt! ;D Poor Severus, he was doomed from the start... (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-16 06:21 pm UTC

	yanks02 2010-01-16 08:38 pm UTC (link)
	Holy crap. I haven't read Snarry in awhile but what a fic to come home to! Love all the kinks, you did a fantastic job. Also: "“Indeed. You are entirely at my mercy.” Snape did refrain from adding, ‘Mwahahaha,’ but only because it didn’t have the dignity he was trying for." just made me LOL. A really good line. (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-18 03:42 am UTC

yanks02, 2010-01-18 03:51 am UTC

	szefi 2010-01-17 11:38 am UTC (link)
	This was funny and very hot (I was a bit afraid reading first due to the warnings but had faith in you:)) (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-18 03:44 am UTC

elvirablue
2010-01-18 01:46 am UTC (link)

A deliciously wild ride, very amusing too. I liked how Snape’s description of the exhibits on the Merry-Go-Round reflected his tastes and preferences. It made the scenes come alive. And I loved that he approved of bliss in small amounts. LOL, that must have made Harry’s uninhibited enjoyment of everything all the more insufferable. The way Snape kept upping the ante to intimidate Harry reminded me of a poker game, only the bets were hot and kinky and they both ended up winning.

“You think you like this sort of thing, do you?” Snape hissed.

Harry craned his head so he could see Snape over his shoulder. “You never know until you try.”

Your Harry was entirely irresistible. :)

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the_con_cept, 2010-01-18 10:21 pm UTC

aceia
2010-01-18 05:09 am UTC (link)

Wow! just WOW...my brain was a pile of mush on the floor by the end of this. It was hot, dirty, wrong on so many levels, and did I forget to mention hot?

I looked at the title, I looked at the kinks, but neither of them prepared me for the masterpiece that is this fic. I was wondering how a fic with that many kinks could have a title like the Merry-Go-Round but you did it. Now every time I look/think about a merry-go-round my mind will be in the gutter.

There are too many parts of this I love to even start quoting it. The Merry-Go-Round, slutty Harry, overprotective/jealous Snape, Harry calling Snape Daddy...Daddy! My mind short circuited when I read that. Where do you come up with this stuff? It's amazing!!!

How do you do it? How do you manage to hit that many kinks, making it deliciously hot, and at the same time it's funny? I wish I could write like that.

Words cannot convey how much I loved this! Thank you for my wonderful gift. I'm off to go read it again!

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the_con_cept, 2010-01-19 11:44 pm UTC

	leela_cat 2010-01-19 05:22 am UTC (link)
	That was so... filthy... wrong... right... omg!hot. A valuable lesson and, I'm sure, one that Harry's willing to learn again and again and again. Heh. (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-01-19 11:46 pm UTC

	harco_potfoy 2010-01-21 05:11 am UTC (link)
	grins A delightful combination of humour and smut :) Very enjoyable read. (Reply to this) (Thread)

the_con_cept, 2010-02-01 10:32 pm UTC

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