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snarryswapmod ([info]snarryswapmod) wrote in [info]snarry_swap,
@ 2010-01-04 00:13:00

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Entry tags:creation: fic, rated: nc-17, unbroken_halo

Happy Daft Day, [info]andreanna!
Recipient: [info]andreanna
Title: If The Shoe Fits…
Author: [info]unbroken_halo
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,049
Warning(s): *Awkward sex, shoe fetish*
Prompt/Summary: Between saying and doing many a pair of shoes is worn out.
A/N: [info]andreanna, after trolling your journal looking for fic ideas I came across one of your Opening Games Art. The art begged to have a story, and since this one piece wasn't a comic, it got one!





If The Shoe Fits…


The water rolled back and forth, forming waves that splashed over the side of the tub with each movement of their bodies. Harry gathered up Severus's hair, tangling his fingers in the dark strands and tugging none too gently. In response to Harry's hint, Severus moaned and slowed his thrusts, taking the time to adjust his hold on Harry's arse before rocking into him again.

Harry wrapped his legs around Severus, digging his bare heel and the heel of the shoe left on his other foot into Severus's back. He tugged Severus down by his hair, slanting his lips across Severus's while he tried to cant his hips toward Severus. Without the anchor provided by his foot dangling over the side, he slid beneath the water, coughing and choking until Severus pushed his bum forward.

Water sloshed between them and out of the tub, once more. Harry hooked his leg over the side, using it to make certain he didn't drown either one of them as Severus continued to slide into him. He arched up out of the water, rubbing his cock against Severus's stomach. But then, his foot slipped, nearly unseating Severus.

Severus growled and his nails dug into Harry's arse as he pressed his feet to the end of the tub for leverage. His long toes rubbed against the slick porcelain, generating squeaks as nearly all the water spilled out of the tub.

Harry moaned when Severus sped his thrusts and continued to tug on Severus's hair in direct proportion to each glide of his cock. Tightening his leg around Severus, he threw his head back and came, his toes curling inside of his lone shoe. As his body began to relax, he slid down in the tub -- just enough for Severus to plant his lips upon Harry's at the same time as he spent himself inside of Harry.



Harry pulled himself out of the Pensieve, panting and leering at Severus. "How in the bloody hell did one fecking shoe get missed?"

Severus smirked. "Only you, Potter, would notice a bloody shoe while watching yourself being fucked." He dipped his head and nuzzled Harry's neck. "Pay it no mind and allow me to rectify the situation. I can suitably recreate that afternoon in which I was merely enjoying a long soak after a day of dealing with dunderheads when I was molested."

Biting off a moan, Harry stepped back and gawked at Severus. "Molested? You? I remember it quite differently; something along the lines of being jerked off my feet and stripped naked with a flick of your wand as I walked past."

Severus shrugged, and adopted an unaffected air. "It's hardly my fault you're a klutz. How can someone be so graceful in the air, and yet, be an utter failure at walking? Let's not even mention tripping over thin air."

"Tripping?" Harry narrowed his eyes at Severus. "Do we need to view it again? I want to make certain that you understand exactly what happened that night."

Severus arched a brow and leaned over the Pensieve, watching the memory from the outside. "It's a good possibility that I need to review the circumstances of your so-called molestation." Reaching out for Harry, he continued. "However, I don't see why we should. As I said, I am willing to recreate the activity to accurately determine whom the guilty party truly was."

Harry snorted, scooting out of reach of Severus's hands. "I don't think so, Snape." Smirking, he ran his eyes over Severus and licked his lips. Then, moving closer to Severus, he slid his hand down, cupping Severus through his robes. "I simply want to know how such a small thing escaped your notice. What caused you to be so distracted?"

"Distracted? I'll admit to being somewhat occupied, but not distracted." Severus wrapped his arms around Harry and pulled him closer. Biting down gently on the soft flesh of Harry's ear, he hummed. His hands roamed down Harry's back and cupped his bum, squeezing his cheeks hard before letting go.

Harry leaned against Severus, his eyes closing while he enjoyed Severus's touch. Then, he shook his head at the squeeze and pulled away. "Oh, no. You aren't getting out of this that easy." He pointed a finger at Severus. "Now, tell me why in the hell you hauled my arse into the tub, but left one shoe on."

Severus sighed. "Fine, if you must know, it's..." He mumbled the rest of the sentence then slanted his lips over Harry's. He nipped and teased Harry's mouth, then abruptly let him go.

Harry blinked, still a bit dazed from Severus's kiss and release tactics. "Wha?"

"Exactly." Severus wrapped his arm around Harry's shoulder and tugged him toward the bedroom. "Now, doesn't that explain everything?" He bent and bit down gently on Harry's earlobe, then sucked the soft skin into his mouth.

"Bwah?"

"Yessss," Severus purred as his fingers toyed with the collar of Harry's robes, just the tips reaching in to stroke and caress Harry's skin. "I suggest we move this discussion to a more..." He drew his wand, twirling it gently between his fingers. Licking his lips in anticipation, he bent to nibble on Harry's nape.

Harry listened to Severus's voice, closing his eyes and letting Severus guide him to their bed. He hummed and waited to hear the rest of Severus's suggestion, his own fingers steadily undoing buttons on his robes. "Oh, tell me more..."

"... Comfortable area and commence with the fetish-- I mean-- the set up of recreating our night in the bath."

"Fetish?" Harry opened his eyes and looked up at Severus.

"I said nothing of the sort," Severus smirked and flicked his wand, divesting them both of clothing. He gave Harry a great shove onto the bed then covered him with his body. Wriggling down and scooping Harry's bum in his palms, he slid Harry across the bed, and began to trace Harry's naked body with his tongue.

Harry writhed under Severus's attentions, only stilling when Severus stretched out one of his legs and sucked on the sensitive skin behind his knee. He gasped and grabbed Severus's hair, tugging frantically on the strands as he noticed the black thigh-high covering his leg and the spiked heel dangling from his toes.

"Severus!"

ETA:
[info]andreanna made a gorgeous art response to [info]unbroken_halo's gift fic. Happy Daft Day, everyone!


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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2010-01-04 12:32 am UTC (link)
LMAO! Brilliant, hot, and sooo funny! I loved it!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 12:36 am UTC (link)
*g* Thanks, darling! I'm glad you enjoyed it. [info]andreanna's art was quite inspiring.

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[info]aeryun
2010-01-04 02:08 am UTC (link)
Very nice, very hot...ok it's more like OMG! HAWT! :D

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:26 am UTC (link)
*g* Thanks, darling. [info]andreanna's art was a fantastic starting point for me.

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[info]torino10154
2010-01-04 02:21 am UTC (link)
LOL That's marvelous-love how clever Severus is in distracting Harry. And the shoe! Perfect story for the art. Great job.

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:53 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I had a wonderful time picking through her art looking for the perfect piece to put words to.

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[info]andreanna
2010-01-04 03:05 am UTC (link)
EEEEE!! hehee!!! OMG! Lovely!! I love the explanation for why the hell there was one shoe left. Silly Snape making his 'mistakes'. How much do I adore the awkwardness of Harry slipping under the water by accident? A LOT! ;alskdfj and the heels!! It demands a illustration XD Thank you!

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[info]snarryswapmod
2010-01-04 03:14 am UTC (link)
If you wish to post an illustration, I know I won't mind. LOL. Or we could post it as a 'little extra something.' :-D Happy Daft Day. Cheers!

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[info]andreanna
2010-01-04 05:42 am UTC (link)
:3 I was just gonna do a cheap edit of the original pic...kinda like THIS
hehehe XD

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[info]snarryswapmod
2010-01-04 05:46 am UTC (link)
Brilliant! XD Want me to add a link after the fic or would you rather we leave it here in comments?

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:28 pm UTC (link)
I don't care if you post the link after the fic, but it's up to [info]andreanna. I'm going to post about it on my journal as well.

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[info]snarryswapmod
2010-01-04 10:31 pm UTC (link)
I added the link after the fic as an ETA.

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-05 01:47 am UTC (link)
Excellent! There's always room for more Snarry, and I am thrilled [info]andreanna enjoyed the fic!

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[info]andreanna
2010-01-04 04:50 pm UTC (link)
Uhhhh, I'd don't really care. It was to be a fun little something for [info]unbroken_halo. I think we're both gonna squee in our journals :) I don't wanna feel like I'm monopolizing your comm :O

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[info]snarryswapmod
2010-01-04 10:30 pm UTC (link)
I added the link after the fic as an ETA.

No worries, it was a fun response. The more Snarry, the better! :-) Cheers!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:26 pm UTC (link)
OMG! YAY! That is awesome! I love the curve of Severus's back and Harry's leg up over him. *g* That expression on Harry's face is wonderful!

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[info]venturous
2010-01-05 12:09 am UTC (link)
omg how hot and fabulous is that???!
loves the lines, the kiss, the hair, the boot!
rawr!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:11 pm UTC (link)
*g* I know I wouldn't mind seeing it too!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:01 pm UTC (link)
YAY! You are very welcome. I'm so glad you enjoyed this! And yes! I am all for an illustration, if you decide to do it.

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[info]vividzephyr
2010-01-04 03:10 am UTC (link)
That was so funny and quite hot. Very well done!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]snarry_fan7
2010-01-04 03:53 am UTC (link)
Very hot, lovely, and amusing. Absolutely wonderful work!~Sophia

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 04:04 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I had an awesome prompt to work with.

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[info]ensnarryed
2010-01-04 05:36 am UTC (link)
I remember it quite differently;

Happy New Year! I love how Harry remembers it! :)

Thank you!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:24 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, and Happy New Year to you as well!

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BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!
[info]accio_kilt
2010-01-04 07:01 am UTC (link)
Hmmmm.... Sev's got a fetish! I love the way he kept distracting Harry!

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Re: BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!
[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:34 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]eriador117
2010-01-04 09:19 am UTC (link)
Lovely :)

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]fancypantsdylan
2010-01-04 11:45 am UTC (link)
LOL, that was so funny and hot, loved the bit about the shoe, ROFL, what a delightfully lovely read :D

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:35 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, and I am thrilled that you enjoyed it!

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[info]asnowyowl
2010-01-04 02:28 pm UTC (link)
Great job!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-04 03:40 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]alisanne
2010-01-04 06:16 pm UTC (link)
Bwahahahahaahaha!
Brilliant, darling, just brilliant.
*giggles*
I think Severus' secret is out now, though. ;)
Hilarious and OH SO HOT! mmmm. Well done!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-05 01:10 am UTC (link)
Thanks, love!

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[info]witchdragon
2010-01-04 09:45 pm UTC (link)
wonderful!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-05 01:45 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]fanficforensics
2010-01-07 07:28 am UTC (link)
Yum! Great job ;)

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-08 01:36 am UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]leela_cat
2010-01-08 02:12 am UTC (link)
I love the shoe fetish and how Severus keeps trying to hide it. *g*

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-08 08:54 pm UTC (link)
*g* Thanks, darling! You know Severus would keep those little details close, if only to keep Harry on his toes.

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[info]lillibet4
2010-01-08 12:21 pm UTC (link)
Ha! Funny and sexy and witting and lovely!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-08 08:59 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]centaury_squill
2010-01-10 04:30 pm UTC (link)
Oh, marvellous! *applauds*

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-10 04:47 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]elvirablue
2010-01-13 02:04 am UTC (link)
LOL! I enjoyed their distraction-filled discussion. Very smooth, Severus!

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-15 02:41 am UTC (link)
Thanks! He's a sly one. *g*

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[info]szefi
2010-01-15 06:13 pm UTC (link)
Very hot:))

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[info]unbroken_halo
2010-01-16 06:49 am UTC (link)
Thanks!

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