Wow. I loved this! Severus writes wonderful D/s: hot, affectionate, sensible and enthralling. Green Eyes’ POV was brilliant. He was so devoted and attentive, observant, and clearly enjoying himself. I grew very attached to him and Stone. *misses them already*
I loved the other characters, too. I almost wished Harley and Fidel had succeeded in tempting Stone into some further action. What a deliciously naughty couple. As were Severus and Harry. I loved the spontaneous, rushed way in which they acted out the fantasy and how they talked about it afterwards. They had such an intimate, trusting relationship.
Like Harry, I was intrigued by the fact that Severus used Green Eyes’ POV. He may be studying Harry, but I think Severus’ fantasy reveals something about what makes him tick. Lots of fascinating, new layers to explore when re-reading. *anticipates*