I'm so glad everyone seems to be enjoying this. Veridian, it was lots of fun to write and I'm glad you liked it.
I started out writing the Green Eyes story, and then realized that I felt like I was writing like I thought a porn writer would write, and not like myself writing porn, if that makes any sense. And that's what suggested the frame. And "Serena Fury" just came from somewhere as the porniest port writer name I could think up.
My personal favorite character is Fidel, who I think is an economist or an accountant or something-- this is just his second job, which allows him all kinds of perving opportunities, plus the chance to play reindeer games with his boyfriend in public. He gets a nice share of Harley's generous commission ...
Thanks for reading all, and I'll try to answer any questions.