What a present to start the weekend with! Wow, it's good to be me! I'm not sure which I'm love with more at this moment in time - the story itself or dingochow for writing it for me!
Adored the "story within a story idea." I didn't think it started slow at all...I was sucked in from the beginning. The fact that for Green Eyes that it was a mutual consent sub/dom relationship (obvious from his thoughts) made it all that much better for me. (Yeah for depraved imaginations!)
I loved how Mr. Harley and Fidel wanted Stone to use/abuse Green Eyes in the shop (those voyeurs!) and Stone was having none of it.
I really need to establish "Reading Porn Aloud Naked Night" (what a brilliant idea). That and several lines made me giggle, like Arthur reading "odd magazines." But I really enjoyed watching Severus and Harry go from fantasy back to real life and how open and trusting their relationship is. Because that's just how it can be with real couples, and just made these fictional two real in all the right ways.
Thank you so very much for writing this for me....it was perfect in so many ways. Damn, I wish I could order books from "Serena Fury" from Amazon. If "she" should happen to pen anymore, you'll let us know, right? :-)