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asnowyowl (asnowyowl) wrote in snarry_swap,

Wow! What a delightfully twisted Snape--pondering Harry's cock with Lily's portrait!

I'm not sure if there's a plausible way to write micro-chan (as a friend of mine calls it) without it being at least a little dark. But this brilliantly walked a narrow line between all out non-con and coercion. Great job

I adore Snape's possessiveness (getting so angry that someone else had touched Harry, and, of course, the 'mine' at the end) and Harry's final acceptance of what's happening.

Loved this visual: Harry collapsed on his side, panting. He had an adorable, bewildered look on his face that begged kissing, but Severus refrained from such inane activities.

Oh, and Ron and Harry's budding friendship was so sweet--Ron already taking care of Harry and showing the wizarding way. And Seamus's playful attitude. Love those Gryff boys!

A wonderful present, triceybabe! Thank you so much!!