Wow. I didn't realize that I was holding my breath until I was getting a bit light-headed, a couple times there. Very well written story! I usually will not read fics with Harry's dad James alive and nasty / stupid, which this did - but also I could see that he was truly trying to make up for how badly he'd screwed up. Sirius was great! And - what a wonderful way to change from a possible Snape as father to Snarry! Great fic, very well done!!