What a richly detailed world you've imagined for this version of HP history! (And I do so agree that Harry brought up by loving parents wouldn't be Harry.) I love the way his and Snape's relationship develops, in spite of James being an arse. The dates which Harry didn't realise were dates - that wake(!) - the visit to the cinema, with your sly Equus reference - and the OMG hot sex - really well done. Excellent work, and a great start to the fest.