You wrote fic!! I LOVE it.all, the building tension, the sex, Snape being the one killing the Death Eaters (which I figured out when it started to get obvious).
You dropped in a two way writing thing too, I love those.
The ending was just perfect, I was slightly worried when I realised Snape had left Harry, but the ending was wonderful, even if we don't see them together we know Harry always gets his man!!