Oh, wow! Sorry for not answering earlier; I was away. But now, that's a lovely fic to come back home to :)
I loved Snape's jealousy and Harry's pushiness. I also loved that they kept one memory of each other, and I'm curious about the memory of Snape that Harry chose to keep. (Or is that the memory of Snape wanking and coming shouting Harry's name that JKR couldn't include in the book on account of it being a children's book? *g*)