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@ 2008-01-09 12:00:00

Entry tags:

creation: fic, lesyeuxverts, rated: nc-17

Happy Daft Day, alliekatgal!
Recipient: alliekatgal
Title: The Welcome of the Prodigal
Author: chiralove
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: AU, wanking, rimming
Prompt: "I have a huge weakness for stories where Harry wants to be with Snape, but Snape rejects him, only to later change his mind. Happy ending, please!"
Author's Note: Thanks to the lovely mods for running this fest, and to A, S, and G for the beta. alliekatgal, I'm afraid I wasn't able to fit all of your kinks into this, but I do hope that you enjoy it and have a very happy (and smutty) New Year!

The Welcome of the Prodigal

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	quill_lumos 2008-01-09 01:30 pm UTC (link)
	Oh I did so like French 'Arry, and his language lessons were wonderful. And conflicted Severus was great. Lovely story Lucie (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:00 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	hambares 2008-01-09 04:40 pm UTC (link)
	Harry with a french accent was fun! I could just picture Severus ready to throttle him each time Harry started talking. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:00 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! so glad you liked it! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	gin_tonic 2008-01-09 06:09 pm UTC (link)
	Mhmmm, French Harry! Very nice! :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:01 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	triceybabe 2008-01-09 07:49 pm UTC (link)
	That was so good! I loved the dialogue and how everything just flowed into the happy ending. Good job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:01 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	klynie1 2008-01-09 09:04 pm UTC (link)
	What a lovely romance. Now I'm all bistro tables and French!Harry. g Thanks! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:01 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, glad you liked it! Thank you so much! :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	torino10154 2008-01-09 09:36 pm UTC (link)
	This was so romantic and cute-Harry with his French accent and of course, Snape had to at least try to muck it up. The body parts discussion so reminded me of Henry V, albeit with different body parts. :P (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:02 pm UTC (link)
	Hehe, I think I'll have to refresh my memory of Henry V ... oops! It wasn't exactly an intentional allusion. g But I'm so glad you liked it - thank you very much! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

torino10154
2008-02-02 05:54 pm UTC (link)

I doubt you really want to know, but I will share-the 1989 film was made by Kenneth Branagh, with Emma Thompson, Robbie Coltrane, Derek Jacobi, Ian Holm, Judi Dench-all the usual suspects in a British film. But Emma is trying to learn English and her lady in waiting is teaching her how to say fingers, nails, etc. It's really amusing. I haven't watched it in years, although I own it. But it says Christian Bale is in it as 'boy'.

Here is a bit from youtube

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alliekatgal
2008-01-09 10:16 pm UTC (link)

Oh, I loved this! I'd say you managed to hit my kinks perfectly!

"You're labouring under a set of delusions almost half as pathetic as you are, you insipid, ill-mannered, empty-headed brat. I'd bed a cockroach before I would even look at you, you slimy, artful little monster."

That's exactly what I love, especially when you can see that all Severus really wants to do is throw him to the floor and completely ravish him! And poor Harry, so bewildered and hurt when Severus didn't want him to sit next to him at the head table!

I loved Harry's accent - he was completely adorable here!

Wonderful job!! Thank you!!!!

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	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:03 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for the wonderful prompt ... and just yay! Thank you! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ivylady 2008-01-10 03:06 am UTC (link)
	I loved French Harry. His and Severus's relationship is so interesting. Great story. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:03 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	snarry_fan7 2008-01-10 05:11 am UTC (link)
	Lovely work! I really like French Harry and how he and Snape slowly (or not so slowly, lol) came together. Wonderfully done!~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:03 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	florida_minxie 2008-01-10 12:09 pm UTC (link)
	What a lovely AU tale! I always enjoy taking Harry away from Hogwarts like this! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:03 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks - I'm so glad you liked it! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	lotrwariorgodss 2008-01-11 06:32 am UTC (link)
	Cute! Love how things unfolded slowly for them, especially since they didn't have any past together to speak of. French!Harry was something I'd never read before, and it was such an interesting concept - I liked it! Lovely entry! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:04 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! I'm glad you liked the AU! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	alisanne 2008-01-12 05:28 pm UTC (link)
	What a great idea! Snarry without all the extra baggage of their unfortunate history, although Severus certainly tried to put up enough barriers, didn't he? I love this Harry, I love how sweet Severus' capitulation was after his struggle, and the sensuality was gorgeous! Very hot! Wonderful fic, Lyvvy, as always! hugs (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:04 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! It was a lot of fun to write ... I love taking them away from their history and letting them have at it. g Thanks! hugs :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	cluegirl 2008-01-14 04:32 am UTC (link)
	Oh, what a lovely, grumbly, unwillingly bewitched Snape this is! He's such a rube, with Harry being all French-lovely and shiny as champagne at him, who can blame him for falling? But still, I can't help wondering who Harry's coterie at Beauxbatons was, since Ron and Hermione weren't to hand... (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:07 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks so much - I'm glad you liked it! French!Harry was a lot of fun to write ... not exactly sure how Beauxbatons happened for him, but I'm sure he found other friends! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	estioe 2008-01-20 02:53 am UTC (link)
	Oh, what a wonderful AU! So charming and sweet and hot and such excellent, warm writing. It just rolls of the tongue. :D I enjoyed this greatly! Off to rec! :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	chiralove 2008-02-02 05:08 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! (Reply to this) (Parent)