Harry's sexual frustration is so typical of a teenage boy. Perfect! I also like the hints to his homosexual characteristics like wanting strength, not liking having to look down at Cho and the feeling of having to take the lead., wanting to rutt against a firm body. As well as references to his pent-up passion. It's great how Snape seems to know all this and uses it, welcomes it. I liked the translastions at the end. They made for a nice moment of retrospection that told me just how much Harry welcomed Snape. And overall, very very hot!