one acquainted with the night (wichie) wrote in snarry_swap, |
filling in holes best left unplugged
Sorry, after that lovely reply, I focus in on the potentially naughty bits.
You know, I can really see all that in Harry and Severus, as they are in the story; Harry, an adult, with a job and a real life, not a post war Hogwarts student, and Severus, having a real life as well, and how they came together that way, and not because of the Wizarding world.
That's lovely, the best, when a writer crafts such a story that exists, really exists, not as a collection of (too cliche) happenings, but a peek into characters that really live.