Hooray, thank you so much for your detailed comments! I'm really happy you liked this!
The mods were kind enough to pass on the message you couldn't read right away. That was definitely helpful to know, so thanks for that as well.
So glad you liked irritable!Snape, and Harry's characterization! I wanted to give you a kind of bottom!Snape/flexible!Snape, as you had asked for, so I hope that came across a little (though more in a slightly bent-toward-Harry-taking-charge way).
Mainly I'm so pleased you thought it worked for Snape's gradual emotional attachment to Harry to come across while he still remained surly and difficult outwardly. I had lots of fun writing to your request, and I'm just thrilled you enjoyed the final product. :D