'How sweet' is right! I have a soft spot for NC-17 fluff. *grin* Of course, now I want to read about their children. I love stories where an adorable daughter has the power to melt Severus into a hopeless puddle of goo. And Harry would be such a great father -- they both would be.
This was probably my favorite line of the whole story: .... wanting to make Severus desire nothing more than to live like this indefinitely.
Mmm, I just love the sentiment and implications of that! I have never read it put like that until now. But yes. Excellent.