Gosh, where do I begin? I love, love, love Severus-with-a-family. And a wonderfully well-crafted family at that! You came up with a slew of original characters and managed to make them seamless and realistic; not only do they make perfect sense in this situation, but I can see them as people with lives outside of this (especially with the child and his parents). I love how you wove the title in through the story- I love that it comes back together at the end. That's absolutely brilliant. Severus' interaction with his family was great, and I adored Harry's cluelessness, and just...gosh, everything about this story was perfect. *sighs happily* I just really, really adored it. Oh! And my favorite line: “Christ, Harry, would it be so terrible?” Because really, that says so much about Severus at the moment, and... *sigh* Just absolutely love this. Wonderful.
I also think I might know who you are. *grin* But I suppose we shall see after the reveal! *hugs*